評論
打印
答案與解析
Part I Writing
【話題分析】
大學生消費是目前家長及教育界比較關注的問題，它所反應的不僅僅是花錢這一表面現象，而是隱藏在這一現象之后的大學生的價值觀、金錢觀等思想層面的問題。
【范文解析】
Nowadays the campus students seem to have no idea of how money comes from, and not to care about their expenditure. They buy whatever they like for themselves, also for their friends, paying no attention to how much these things cost.
Some people say that it is not a problem for college students to spend much. After all, the society is progressing and the life is being enriched. With the living standard being raised, it is reasonable to improve the expenditure of students. There is nothing to blame.
For me, it is not just a habit of spending more money; it is a reflection of students' outlook on money and value. The students get money from their parents so easily that they have no idea of earning money with their hard work and effort, thus developing an awareness that they want to get things but are unwilling to work hard for their goal. Definitely, that is harmful. The campus students can improve their lives, but with the money earned by themselves.
第一段講述了這一現象，大學生喜歡什么買什么，從不關注錢從何處來，也不關心自己的花銷。
第二段提出了一些人的看法，他們認為社會進步了，生活水平提高了，大學生多花一點也無可厚非。
第三段講述了作者自己的觀點看法。在作者看來，這并不僅僅是花錢習慣，更多地反映了學生的金錢觀、價值觀。學生從父母那里很容易就能要來錢，所以他們就不會想通過自己的努力來賺錢，漸漸就會培養這樣一種想法：希望不勞而獲。最后作者強調，學生提高自己的生活水平并沒有什么不對，但要用自己賺來的錢。
【高分妙招】
議論文經常出現在六級作文中，考生要注意合理表達自己的觀點，表明自己對問題的看法。在論述中，不要僅僅停留在表面層次，而要深究其內在原因，才能給考官留下深刻的印象。
