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下面是2014年英語四級作文范文：留學海外，希望考生了解四級范文的寫作思路，增強自己的寫作實力。
Studying Abroad 留學海外
(1)有人認為留學海外有許多好處。
(2)也有人認為留學海外有許多弊端
(3)我的看法是…
四、六級作文類型：提綱式對比分析類議論文
審題構思：
這是篇段首句續寫式作文。經分析，文中所給的前兩段的段首句均可作為該段的主題句。第三段中，可根據所給的段首句暗示的寫作方向，得出結論，并以此為該段主題句。故第三段主題句為：One must consider both sides of the factors carefully before making up his mind。由此完成通篇構思，其全文和各段框架具體構思如下：
全文構思
1.Attending school abroad has many advantages.
2.There are also some disadvantages.
3.One must consider both sides Of factors carefully.
段落構思
第一段 Topic Sentence Attending school abroad has many advantages.
l. widen our vision
2. travel widely
3. improve the second foreign language
4. acquire updated knowledge
第二段 Topic Sentence There are also many disadvantages。
1. language barrier
2. misunderstanding
3. high tuition and cost of living
第三段 Topic Sentence One must consider both sides of the factors carefully.
1. good to study the subject weak in our country
2. should consider the disadvantages
精品詞匯
widen our visionhorizon 開闊視野
get acquainted with 了解
first-rate facilities 一流設備
language barrier 語言障礙
絕妙銜接
... In the first place, … Secondly, … Thirdly, …
But the most important thing... For all these...
However, … As a result, ... Besides, ... Furthermore, …
Therefore, ... On the whole, … But on the other hand, ...
良好開端
1. Attending school abroad has many advantages.
2. Attending school abroad has many positive aspects.
3. Studying abroad has many strong points.
4. Studying abroad has many favorable aspects.
成功收口
1. But on the other hand, one must not lose sight of the disadvantages.
2. But most important of all, one should not neglect the disadvantages of studying abroad.
3. Finally, one should always think carefully before making up one's mind.
4. Finally, everything depends on his personal financial status. If the advantages can outweigh the disadvantages, he should make up his mind to study abroad. Otherwise, it's advisable to study at home.
組段成篇
讀讀范文，看看文章的寫作模式——文章先分析留學海外的益處，隨后分析其弊端，最終得出結論。讀讀范文，看看文章的開篇、過渡與收口。把作文的思路看出來。把作文的思路讀出來。借你一雙慧眼，請把文題的奧秘看個真真切切，明明白白。
讀讀范文，想想看，如今有多少大學生、高中生甚至是中小學生都在拼命地想到海外留學，他們有的在海外功成名就，鵬程萬里；有的卻傾家蕩產，學業難成，貧困潦倒，陷入十分尷尬的境地，有苦難言。留學海外，有利也有弊。是弊大于利還是利大于弊一切因人而異。想想看，對此話題，你持何高見動動腦筋，想想看，作文的思路想出來。
讀讀范文，想想你的作文該怎樣寫讀了范文，就該你露一手了。看你能否寫出絕妙的語段，精彩的作文，勝過作者。切記：你今天的努力會換回你明天的成績；你今天的努力更會換回你明天的寫作能力。
