再次,提純范文“句子寫作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
類似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是簡單的復(fù)雜句。但其運(yùn)用方法并不簡單,注意練習(xí)并接句的使用,會(huì)使句子顯的更加飽滿。
3. enable v. 使…能夠
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因?yàn)椤钡倪B詞還有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我們常用的人稱開頭,句式簡單,我們可以通過把since提前改變句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多樣化。
最后,提純范文“措辭”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上萬的
形容“多”的表達(dá)方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“討論,辯論”的意思,而是“認(rèn)為”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 現(xiàn)象
social phenomenon 社會(huì)現(xiàn)象
natural phenomenon 自然現(xiàn)象
6. intellectual adj. 聰明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(選詞策略:使用最近所學(xué)的單詞,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever)
在分析并掌握范文之后,我們需要運(yùn)用范文知識(shí)練習(xí)仿寫。筆者運(yùn)用2005年12月范文中的模板結(jié)構(gòu)仿寫了2006年12月的四級(jí)作文,以供參考:
1. 許多人喜歡在除夕夜看春節(jié)晚會(huì)
2. 但有些人提出取消春節(jié)晚會(huì)
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.