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考生如何利用考場下的300分鐘、3000分鐘甚至30000分鐘，合理充分地準備四級寫作，從而能夠輕松自如地應對考場上的30分鐘呢?
在復習準備四級寫作時，我們應該按照“謀篇、段落、句子、措辭”(如圖一)“四步走”的宏觀復習方式來準備。我們應該將以往的范文作為框架，從謀篇布局著手，加以潤色字詞句的修飾，將其變成自己的四級高分作文。
學習范文或掌握優秀作文是打破提高自己傳統寫作語言的第一步。下面我們通過2005年12月四級范文，分析學習如何提純范文中的“謀篇、段落、句子、措辭”并加以利用，使其變成自己的語言。
Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourist?
1. 名校校園正成為旅游新熱點
2. 校園是否應對游客開放，人們看法不同
3. 我認為…
Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourists?
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先，提純范文 “謀篇布局”及結構模板。
第一段：提出問題或現象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段：正反列舉人們的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段：擺明自己觀點。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次，提純范文“段落寫作”。
段落寫作分為統一性，連貫性和完整性三方面。
統一性(unity)：段落開頭的主題句應該做到不可太寬泛，也不可太具體，做到有較強的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展開。范文第二段首句以設問的方式提出一個問題is it a good or bad thing就有很強的概況性。下文自然會一方面從好的方面說明，另一方面從壞的方面說明。
連貫性(coherence)：關聯詞是使文章段落之間相互連貫的必要條件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“啟承轉合”遞進的順序是文章條理清晰，層層展開。
完整性(completeness)：以設問句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”開頭，這是平時較少運用的段落寫作方式——設問法?！癘n one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落寫作分類列舉法的典型用法。
