說說今天的作文吧，典型的給定觀點的文章，也可以說是問題解決型的文章。這樣文章開頭有一個背景引入：父母為孩子包辦一切。觀點很明確：這樣做是有危害的，家長應(yīng)該讓孩子們獨立！接下來就是該怎么做。但是提綱是只給了兩點，需要我們寫出三段這樣段落安排就有一定的自我選擇了：

我們可以這樣來處理：
第一段：背景和危害
第二段：解決
第三段：展望
這樣第二段就是重點

還可以：
第一段：背景
第二段：危害
第三段：解決和展望
這樣第三段就是重點了。
這樣的寫法都可以以，前我們習慣了第一種寫法我給同學們寫一個第二種寫法。

第一句引入論題：
Recently the issue of how should parents help children to be independent has been in the limelight and has aroused wide concern in the public.
第二第三句背景介紹。
The only child policy has brought a lot of pressure for both parents and children during the past decades. Quite a lot of parents have done almost everything for their children for the sake of love.
第一段結(jié)束：
Recently the issue of how should parents help children to be independent has been in the limelight and has aroused wide concern in the public. The only child policy has brought a lot of pressure for both parents and children during the past decades. Quite a lot of parents have done almost everything for their children for the sake of love.

第二段說后果：
It is difficult for these kids to develop and cultivate their character and to be independent with their parent’s so-called love.
再加一句：
They can not survive the future fierce competition owing to the lack of independence.
第二段結(jié)束：
It is difficult for these kids to develop and cultivate their character and to be independent with their parent’s so-called love. They can not survive the future fierce competition owing to the lack of independence.

第三段說如何做：
A number of solutions can be found for parents to help children to be independent, with the following ones being foremost. Firstly , parents should offer their children more opportunities to come into frequent contact with the society and form their own picture about this world. Secondly, playing and communicating with their peers should be favored by their parents because these activities can develop children’s interpersonal skills, which may put them in a favorable position in the future job markets. What’s more, financial burden, psychological burden and even moderate anxiety can make children more fortitude and mature when confronting the difficulties .

完整的文章可以是這樣的：
Recently the issue of how should parents help children to be independent has been in the limelight and has aroused wide concern in the public. The only child policy has brought a lot of pressure for both parents and children during the past decades. Quite a lot of parents have done almost everything for their children for the sake of love.
It is difficult for these kids to develop and cultivate their character and to be independent with their parent’s so-called love. They can not survive the future fierce competition owing to the lack of independence.
A number of solutions can be found for parents to help children to be independent, with the following ones being foremost. Firstly , parents should offer their children more opportunities to come into frequent contact with the society and form their own picture about this world. Secondly, playing and communicating with their peers should be favored by their parents because these activities can develop children’s interpersonal skills, which may put them in a favorable position in the future job markets. What’s more, financial burden, psychological burden and even moderate anxiety can make children more fortitude and mature when confronting the difficulties . Only in this way can our future generation shoulder their responsibility.

關(guān)于字數(shù)：這個文章一共有209個字，肯定是超了。同學在實際的操作中可以去掉很多修飾的東西比如which may put them in a favorable position in the future job markets等等
總之，四級作文100以上就是我們的目標！
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