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adj. 吸引人的，顯著的
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1．第一段第三句中的 with the rapid development of economic, there have a variety of recreational facilities 應(yīng)改為 with the rapid development of our economy, there are now a variety of recreational facilities。Economic 是形容詞，不能用在這里作介詞of 的賓語，應(yīng)改用名詞economy。后半句there have語法有錯，應(yīng)改為there are。
2．第二段第一句However, while as the old saying goes, every cion has two sides 應(yīng)改為 However, as the old saying goes, every coin has two sides。本句中已有as作連接詞，就不能再用while了。
3．第二段第三句many students are so interested in playing computer games that they even lose interst in their study 應(yīng)改為 many students are so interested in playing computer games that they lose interest in their studies。本句中，even這個副詞被刪去了。
4．第二段第五句中的in the first year of our university 應(yīng)改為 in his first year of university。原表達(dá)有可能指“我們大學(xué)創(chuàng)辦的第一年”，改過后才表示“他上大學(xué)的第一年”。
5．第二段第六句he is crazy about it and spent most of time before the computer應(yīng)改為he is crazy about it and spends most of his time before the computer。本句講的是現(xiàn)在經(jīng)常發(fā)生的情況，應(yīng)該都用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。另外，most of time應(yīng)為most of his time。
6．第二段第七句To play games, he doesn’t take classes… 建議改為Completely addicted to computer games, he now doesn’t take classes…。不定式短語To play games在這里作目的狀語，而Completely addicted to computer games用作原因狀語，在意思上更為確切。
7．第二段倒數(shù)第三句 I worry he might be driven out of the university 建議改為I am afraid he will be expelled from the university。情態(tài)動詞might 表示的可能性比較小，不如will肯定。expel是“開除”的意思，用在這里更為確切。
8．第二段最后兩句 I once talk to him and ask him not to play truancy but he said the teaching is so boring. He liked the games建議改為 I once talked to him and tried to persuade him not to play truancy, but he said the teaching was so boring and he liked the games better。這里主要是時態(tài)問題。Once這個副詞是表示過去的某個時間，所以，動詞該用過去時。
9．第三段第一句中的recreational activities can do us good but it can also do harms應(yīng)改為recreational activities can do us good but it can also do us harm。do sb. good 和 do sb. harm 都是習(xí)語，不可隨意改動。
10．第三段第三句Above all, study is the first 建議改為Whether you like it or not, study should come first。原句中的Above all是在提及一件你認(rèn)為比其他同類事件都重要的事件時用的，例如:
Max is hardworking, cheerful, and above all honest.
He will be remembered above all as a loving husband and a family man.
11．第三段最后一句Only strike a balance between recreational activities and study, can we live a happy life中，動詞原形strike 不可直接用來做狀語，必須改為by striking。
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| striking | ['straikiŋ] |
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| available | [ə'veiləbl] |
想一想再看 adj. 可用的，可得到的，有用的，有效的 |
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| minutes | ['minits] |
想一想再看 n. 會議記錄，(復(fù)數(shù))分鐘 |
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| boring | ['bɔ:riŋ] |
想一想再看 adj. 令人厭煩的 |
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| skip | [skip] |
想一想再看 v. 跳過，略過，遺漏 |
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| persuade | [pə'sweid] |
想一想再看 vt. 說服，勸說 |
聯(lián)想記憶 | |
| release | [ri'li:s] |
想一想再看 n. 釋放，讓渡，發(fā)行 |
聯(lián)想記憶 | |
| variety | [və'raiəti] |
想一想再看 n. 多樣，種類，雜耍 |
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| expel | [iks'pel] |
想一想再看 vt. 驅(qū)逐，逐出，開除 |
聯(lián)想記憶 | |
| participate | [pɑ:'tisipeit] |
想一想再看 vt. 分享 |
聯(lián)想記憶 |
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