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Hello, John, it's Christine. I've just looked through the revised slides for your presentation, and they're now much better.
你好，約翰，我是克里斯汀。我剛看過你修改過的報告幻燈片，現在好多了。
I've got a couple of general comments.
我有一些寬泛的意見。
You thought there might be too many slides.
你覺得幻燈片可能太多了。
I don't think that's a problem, though several would be improved if you replaced the statistics.
我不認為這是一個問題，雖然如果你替換掉這些統計數據，將會改進一些。
A few words would be easier to take in.
寥寥數語比較容易理解。
Then don't the slides strike you as looking rather dull and predictable? The content is fine, but the design needs some variety.
那么，你不覺得幻燈片看起來相當乏味和老套嗎？內容很好，但是設計需要一些變化。
Maybe adding a few animations would help.
也許添加一些動畫會有所幫助。
And two quite specific points. Something seems to have gone wrong in slide three.
還有兩點非常具體。第3張幻燈片似乎出了問題。
The graph is fine, but I can't make sense of the bar chart.
那個圖表很好，但是我看不懂那個條形圖。
It doesn't bear any relation to what's gone before, or after.
它與之前或之后發生的事沒有任何關系。
And finally, I remember we discussed the grammar mistake you had in slide six, and you've dealt with that, but if you have another look, I'm sure you'll notice the spelling error that's crept in.
最后，我記得我們討論過你在第6張幻燈片中出現的語法錯誤，你們已經處理過了，但是如果你們再看一遍，我肯定你們會注意到微小的拼寫錯誤。
OK, once you've dealt with that, it'll be fine. Goodbye.
一旦你處理好了，就很好了。再見。
