2016年3月26日托福寫作真題解析

綜合寫作

　　這次綜合寫作的話題屬于科技類話題

　　總論點：飛機的第一個發明者是不是Whitehead

　　閱讀部分：1. 對于第一架飛機的印象是來自于畫像(photo reports)，畫像都不夠真實，且不靠譜;

　　2. 由于設計的一個輪子的一個wing不能飛離地面，第一架飛機飛不起來

　　3. 飛機的引擎engine不夠好用。

　　聽力部分：1. 由于過去的科技(打印技術)不夠發達，沒有攝影，只能靠畫像來紀錄物品，而且飛機的飛的速度快，沒有拍到;同時，他總在早上測試飛機，比較暗。所以WH這個人發明的飛機是真的

　　2. 第一架飛機是可以飛起來的，因為有科學家已經用模型做了幾次試驗了，能飛的很成功，并且完全都是按照設計圖設計的。

　　3. 不是Whitehead的問題，因為那時候的科技不夠發達，aircraft builder對設計不夠了解。有人會去買Whitehead就說明他的設計沒問題。引擎其實是很好用的。

　　注意寫作時每一點中的矛盾聚焦點所在

　　獨立寫作

　　Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is often not a good idea to move to a new city or a new country because you will lose old friends.

　　這是一道常考試題。寫作構思，該題目為“二選一”類話題(亦可以劃為“利弊類”)，即任何可以用“yes”或“no”來回答的話題大多屬于這一類寫作范疇。該類型話題可以按照“一邊倒”或者“讓步式”寫作結構進行構思：

　　“一邊倒”即“開頭段-正方理由1-正方理由2-正方理由3-結尾段”;

　　“讓步式”即“開頭段-正方理由1-正方理由2-正方缺點/反方優點-結尾段”.兩種寫作方法均可，更推薦“讓步段”寫作方式，凸顯思維的全面性。

　　正式寫作前可以分別列出其優缺點

　　Advantages:

　　1. become more independent

　　2. more opportunities to know new friends and establish new relationship

　　3. to have chance to experience new life style

　　Drawbacks:

　　1. may lose contact with old friends

　　2. may encounter urgent problems, without help of old friends.

　　范文賞析

　　Currently, this fast changing world has witnessed great changes in people’s living style: an increasing number of people tend to move to a new city or a new country in the pursuit of their own goals. Although moving to a brand new city would make one feel strange and at loss, its advantages far outweigh its drawbacks. Therefore, it is inappropriate to overstate the relationship between the place and friends.

　　Moreover, moving into a new city or a country has offered us a lot of advantages. New places can widen our horizons and visions, for we are exposed to a different living environment and culture background. With all the things different, we can enjoy different customs, meet the local people, learn a new dialect or foreign language and experience a fresh atmosphere. We can truly feel the real scenery and the first-handed information by strolling around the new place, which would definitely be a different experience by watching it on TV. Thus, new place can bring us new lifestyle and experience.

　　Finally, we can also meet and make new friends with different backgrounds in the new place. We can still share our sorrows and happiness with these new friends as we do with our old friends. Different experiences would surely enrich our life there. Besides, it is rather interesting and colorful to make so many different kinds of friends.

　　In a word, distance cannot set bosom friends apart because of the new technologies. Therefore, the merits of moving to another city are far outweighing its drawbacks.