分析因果關(guān)系(Cause and Effect)
對于這類題目,首先要明確出題者要我們談原因還是談結(jié)果。雖然有時候兩者都有。但是在絕大多數(shù)情況下,我們只要討論其中的一個方面如果該討論原因我們卻大談結(jié)果,就犯了張冠李戴的錯誤結(jié)局是可想而知的。
為了提高文章的質(zhì)一缺,我們建議大家在做brainstorming時除了考慮直接的因果關(guān)系之外,還可以在廣度和深度上做一些努力。比如考慮全國、全球范圍的因果關(guān)系或者文化、道德、傳統(tǒng)等層次的因果關(guān)系,這樣經(jīng)常能保證文章內(nèi)容的優(yōu)勢,從而為我們贏得高分。從經(jīng)驗上看,最好的搭配是兩個直接的原因或結(jié)果加上一個間接的原因或者結(jié)梁,這樣既好寫又能提高質(zhì)量。另外還要注意要點的順序問題,最好把直接的因果放在前面,間接的因果放在最后,以達到強調(diào)它的目的。在結(jié)論段的最終評論中,如果文章是談某個問題的原因,我們就可以提出一些建議;而如果是談結(jié)果,我們就可以討論意義,即解決這個問題可以帶來很多好處。
Now the Internet has almost become the symbol of information age. Some think that it is a very great invention because they can do many things that were impassible. But some view the Internet with much disapproval because it distracts people's attention rather than help people do things better. What is your opinion about the influence of Internet on the modern society? Write an essay of about 400 wards on the Following topic:
The Internet and the Modem Society
In the first pact of your writing you should present your thesis statement, and in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details. In tire last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.
The Internet and the Modem Society
Recently the influence of Internet has attracted much public attention. People worry about the time wasted on it, the damage caused by virus spread on it, and most of all, some violent crimes committed due to the violent games played on it. All these concerns nay be reasonable. / But if we take a broader perspective, we may find that the Internet has had many positive impacts on the modem society.
First of all, Internet has made the access to information more convenient. In the past, people could get information they wanted through only limited channels, such as newspaper, radio, and television. This means that only a certain amount of people could get the information at certain time and in certain place. / But now with the help of Internet, people can get information no matter when and where they want. As a researcher has pointed out, information explosion means that people live in the ocean of information, and Internet has been essential to make that true.
Besides, Internet has also made communication more convenient. Sociologists agree that communication is vital to maintain harmonious human relation, but this communication was rather inconvenient in the past despite the continuous improvement of technology. Letters have been so slow as to be nicknamed "snail mail", telegraph and telephone may be quicker, but they have been very costly. / But now many new communication tools developed on the basis of the Internet, such as e-mail, MSN and QQ, have made talking to a person extremely quick, convenient, and virtually free. This will undoubtedly improve the human relations in the modern world.
The most important impact, however, is that Internet has make social interaction more convenient. Before the era, various social institutes had only limited options to choose from if they wanted to reach the public, and naturally the result was usually unsatisfactory. / But now in the Internet era, all these institutes can set up their own websites, which c7n not only tell the public information but also collect reaction from the public. / For example, the government can collect people's opinion about certain project through the Internet, producers can promote products through Internet and universities can clarify admission policies through Internet. The result is that Internet can help to bring about a more open, fair and interactive society.
In a word, more convenient social interaction, personal communication and access to information are the three major changes the Internet has made in the modern society. Although there do exist some problems with the Internet, these positive influences certainly are more important. What we should do is find measures to solve the problems rather than just talking about them. Just as the proverb says, we should not stop eating for fear of being choked.