參考答案
1)He asked the policeman,“What happened to you?”
/ He asked the policeman,“What happened to me?”
代詞與先行詞不一致
2)Not only did he make a promise, but he kept.
連詞使用不當(not only前置一定要用倒裝句)
3)All are ready, aren't they?
代詞不一致
4)Listening to the wind and smelling the fragrant of the lily, you will found that the summer is coming.結(jié)構(gòu)不平行
5)I accept his advice because I know he is keen in marketing.
語態(tài)不一致