巧用連接詞
有的學(xué)生在作文中使用過多簡單句,成了簡單句堆砌;有的寫復(fù)雜句時,動輒用so, and,then,but,or,however,yet等非但達不到豐富表達方式的目的,反而使句子結(jié)構(gòu)松散、呆板。為了避免這種現(xiàn)象,可以通過使用連接詞,尤其是一些表示從屬關(guān)系的連接詞,如 who,which,that,because,since,although,after,as,before,when,whenever,if,unless,as if等,不僅能夠豐富句型,而且還能夠把思想表達得更清楚,意義更連貫。例如: Natural resources are very limited. They will be exhausted in the near future. It is not true. But it becomes a major concern around the world. This is a widely accepted fact.
這段文字用簡單句表達,它們之間內(nèi)在的邏輯關(guān)系含糊不清,意思支離破碎。如果使用連接詞,將單句與其前后合并,形成主次關(guān)系,就把一個比較復(fù)雜的內(nèi)容和關(guān)系表達得層次清楚、結(jié)構(gòu)嚴謹。例如: It is a widely accepted fact that there is a major concern around the world for the exhaustion of limited natural resources in the near future,though it is unlikely to be true. 再如:
The Mississippi River is one of the longest rivers in the world,and in spring time it often overflows its banks,and the lives of many people are endangered.
此句用and把三個分句一貫到底,既乏味又可笑。如果使用了關(guān)系代詞which,語義就會更連貫,語言也會更流暢:
The Mississippi River,which is one of the longest rivers in the world,often overflows its banks in the spring time,endangering the lives of many people.
adj. 有限的,被限制的
動詞limit的過