試著改變一下每個(gè)句子的開頭

許多學(xué)生在寫作中傾向于用與人有關(guān)系的詞性，用名詞和代詞作為句子的開頭，如 People，We，I，He，They，She等。但這種開頭見多了，難免讓人厭倦。試比較：

A. People throughout the country have greatly demanded all kinds of nutritious food.
B. There is a great demand across the country for all kinds of nutritious food.
第一句改用非人稱名詞作為主語開頭，第二句則用there ＋be句型開頭。這樣既改變了主語＋謂語＋賓語單調(diào)句型，又把想強(qiáng)調(diào)的意思突出出來。實(shí)際上，為了把文章寫得生動(dòng)活潑，除了用主語開頭外，還可以用句子的其他成分開頭。

1. 以形容詞或形容詞組開頭 如：①M(fèi)ary was very pleased and telephoned her mother．→Pleased，Mary telephoned her mother．②The girl，hungry and thirsty，went back home．→Hungry and thirsty，the girl went back home．

2. 以副詞開頭 如：The child stayed there quietly．→Quietly，the child stayed there．

3. 以不定式開頭 如：He got up very early to catch the bus．→To catch the bus，he got up very early．

4. 以現(xiàn)在分詞或過去分詞開頭 如：①I was filled with anticipation when I came home from school that dark winter's day so long ago．→Coming home from school that dark winter's day so long ago，I was filled with anticipation． ②If you give me enough time，I can do it well．→Given enough time，I can do it well．

5. 以介詞短語開頭 如：Chester like many other adventurers had experienced fear and conquered it．→Like many other adventurers，Chester had experienced fear and conquered it．

6. 以同位語開頭 如：Sue，our monitor，always likes giving suggestions to everybody．→Our monitor，Sue，always likes giving suggestions to everybody．

7. 以從句開頭 如：①Francis had already surprised his friends several times before he sailed round the world single-handed．→Before he sailed round the world single-handed，F(xiàn)rancis had already surprised his friends several times．②You will greatly improve your finished product if you have a quality control inspection．→If you have a quality control inspection， you will greatly improve your finished product．