上次欣賞了If you could meet a famous entertainer or athlete, who would that be, and why? 如果你可以遇見一位著名的演繹者或者運動員，你想見誰，并且闡述為什么。這篇滿分作文的前兩段。
緊接著是第三段：
Second, having previously known that Norah Jones has been performing in a pub as teenager, I would like to know more about her opinions on teenager working, both full-time and part-time. As a university student, I'm still struggling between my major and my true calling, which is music. I appreciate her opinions on whether I should follow my music dreams or shall I just keep it a hobby. And if I were to chase my dream, is playing for pubs the best choice? Since Norah Jones has more experience on this topic, a meet with her might very well set my future road towards a steady direction.此段同樣第一句話表明考生的第二個理由，即希望和諾拉瓊斯討論是否支持青少年參加全職或兼職工作。此處非常巧妙的是，考生將諾拉瓊斯自身的經歷和社會熱點話題很好的結合在一起，將眼光不僅局限在諾拉瓊斯的個人事跡上，而是以自己的眼光來討論青少年參加工作的話題，并對此進行了有效擴展，但同時不忘與諾拉瓊斯這一人物緊緊相關，而不是一味跑題。這個思路非常聰明，使看似個人的理由變得具有深度和思考性。同時以疑問句的方式將與諾拉瓊斯面對面的畫面鋪展開來。從語言組織上，考生再次用到分詞做狀語的語法點。同時結合了現在進行時表感情色彩，現在完成進行時，whether引導的賓語從句，since 引導的原因狀語從句，非限制性定語從句，情態動詞，甚至if 引導的虛擬語氣等語法現象，達到了了句式多樣化的效果。
接下來第三段：
Third, since I personally admire Norah Jones to a great extent, I would like to take her on a trip of my own country, China. China abounds with natural scenery that differs from that of the states, a diversity of architectural styles, different Chinese cuisines, and a host of passionate people. Taking a tour of our wonderful country and its distinct culture may give Norah Jones some inspirations on musical creation. I would be overjoyed if her trip to China would contribute more or less to her next album. If not, I would still feel satisfied, since few people can enjoy a trip with their idol. And what's best, I can practice my oral English with her along the trip! 此段是正文的第三個理由，考生的安排極為精巧，在主題的深度上可以說是層層遞進。開始第一個理由看似只是個人音樂知識的探討，第二個理由就逐步遞進到社會問題，而第三個理由則是升華的作用，上升到文化層面。視角由諾納瓊斯的本人轉移到考生自己的國家，并舉出本國的特色，如菜系，景色，建筑和熱情的好客的國民。簡短的排比凸顯出了自己國家的特色，與其說是談諾拉瓊斯，倒不如說換了角度談文化特色。但考生并沒有一味談國家特色，而是筆鋒一收，接著轉回到諾拉身上，為什么作者要談這個呢？Taking a tour of our wonderful country and its distinct culture may give Norah Jones some inspirations on musical creation. I would be overjoyed if her trip to China would contribute more or less to her next album.這樣的文化一定會給諾拉創作靈感，將文化特色融入到自己的專輯里。原來如此，讓文化的引入變得有理有據，更加自然。
最后結尾段：
That's why I look forward to meeting Norah Jones, my favorite jazz singer and composer. 結尾段干凈收尾，簡潔明了，沒有過于贅述。
所以這篇滿分作文整體最大的亮點，一是選材上新穎獨特，同時又是美國本土明星，貼近考官心理。二是思路論點上，從請教音樂——社會問題討論——文化交流層層遞進，步步升華，給人親切之感，好像的確在跟諾拉進行面對面的交流。
三是語言上，文章中大量運用了排比句，同義詞轉換，和不同的句式結合。使語言樸實自然，娓娓道來。無論是思路上還是語言上，都值得考生細細揣摩，模仿和學習。