這篇托福題目是：If you could meet a famous entertainer or athlete, who would that be, and why? 如果你可以遇見一位著名的演繹者或者運動員，你想見誰，并且闡述為什么。從題目的理解上，首先要注意關鍵詞，entertainer或者athlete，所以考生把人物選定為singer, dancer, performer, 或者像Kobe Brant, David backham這樣的運動明星都是可以的。但不能選定自己的家人或者朋友這樣的身邊人。

滿分作文開篇是這樣的：

If given the chance to meet a famous entertainer or athlete, I would definitely choose Norah Jones, winner of 8 Grammy Awards in 2003. 開頭簡潔，標新立異。首先在選材上，作者沒有選用比如邁克杰克遜，喬丹，劉翔這些大家耳熟能詳但不夠心想的明星，而是舉了一個新穎但是同樣著名的，曾獲8項格萊美大獎的美國爵士歌手，諾拉瓊斯，能夠吸引考官的眼球，讓人眼前一亮，并有興趣去品讀考生自己的理由。在語言組織上，if given the chance to do…I would do 考生一上來就用了一個較有難度的語法點，過去分詞做狀語。這樣的結構比簡單的if引導的狀語從句更為新穎華麗。考生自己可以利用這樣的句型來練習，比如If give the chance to go back to campus, I would put time in its utmost value. 如果給我一個機會回到校園，我會最大限度的利用時間。另外在用詞上，definitely這一副詞的使用，表明了考生內心的對此題目的自信。這樣的開篇清爽自然，毫無贅述，一目了然。

第二段如下：

In the first place, as an amateur in jazz music, I would like to ask her for some tips in jazz performance. Since I first heard her voice over the radio, I have been deeply attracted by her unique voice, a wonderful mixture of ease, leisure, laziness, a bit of everything together. I’ve always been wondering how to effectively convey my feelings through my voice. A talk with Norah Jones might hopefully give me some inkling and teach me how to make my songs sing for my soul. 正文第一句話直接闡述考生的個人理由，as an amateur in jazz music, I would like to ask her for some tips in jazz performance. 也就是想要與諾拉瓊斯請教爵士音樂的知識。第一句見主題的方式，讓考官能夠迅速捕捉考生的思路。接下來娓娓道來為什么希望向諾拉瓊斯來請教，因為考生自從從收音機中聽到諾拉瓊斯的聲音，就被她獨特的嗓音深深吸引。在這一段中，考生細致的描述充分展現了考生的詞匯量?？纯忌侨绾斡靡幌盗械呐疟?，一連串的同位語來描述諾拉瓊斯獨特的嗓音的：a wonderful mixture of ease, leisure, laziness, a bit of everything together.一種混合著放松，閑適，慵懶，沒點感覺都有一點點的美妙的結合。這一系列描述真實細膩，仿佛考官也能聽到這樣的聲音。