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畢加索 Picasso
Katie J. Famous artist Pablo Picasso also highlights the importance of creativity. In the beginning of his painting career, Picasso did unoriginal work. Though it was apparent he was extraordinarily talented, the pieces lacked creativity and originality. Later, he started to experiment with his art, resulting in the outcome of his most famous pieces. Picasso's incomparable creativity not only resulted in beautiful artwork but he created an entirely new style of abstract artistry. His inspiring work forever changed the world of art and made our culture more rich and multifaceted.

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術大師畢加索作為這個部分的結束實在是再合適不過了。我唯一的建議就是作者可以在提到一些名畫的時候再具體一點。也就是說，如果直接提到《格爾尼卡》、《多拉·瑪爾的畫像》等名字，就會顯得更加權威、專業。