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墨西哥灣漏油事件 BP Oil Spill
Julia W. Our world's environmental crisis is at the worst that the human race has ever witnessed it before, especially with the recent BP oil spill, named the worst in the history of America. Creativity is required for new solutions to help assuage the damage of this spill;older solutions that may have once been successful are deemed useless in their trials to p contain this spill. Many different methods have been utilized, attempting to plug the leaks in the fallen oil rig. Recent attempts such as constructing a giant dome, spraying the waters F with chemical dispersants, and plugging up the leaks with trash such as tires and rope have all failed. Needed more than ever today are novel notions and creative solutions that are more likely to solve this leak.
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"help assuage the damage of this spill"這個(gè)短語(yǔ)寫得漂亮。排比結(jié)構(gòu)也用得非常好："Recent attempts such as constructing a giant dome, spraying the waters with chemical dispersants, and plugging up the leaks with trash such as tires and rope have all failed."文章寫得很棒！