如果談起來作文,很多名師就會跟你談一談“詞、句、段、篇、章”,這個時候,你的瞌睡蟲也就馬上襲來了。太多的理論實在是枯燥不堪,打破傳統(tǒng),直接引取萬人矚目的奧巴馬演講,原汁原味的為各位考友還原英語的真實面貌。把枯燥的理論Pia飛到天邊,各位考友可以直接模仿美國總統(tǒng)奧巴馬的最新演講,讓自己的作文分數(shù)一飛沖天!
文章編輯方式為第一段是原文,第二段是制造完成的模板。為了保證考友們不會把新托福模板理解錯誤,以及保證句意的理解,把原文也放在了這里,而且力勸每一位考友首先研究原文的含義,然后再使用模板,絕對是事半功倍的選擇!
Think about the America within our reach: a country that leads the world in educating its people; an America that attracts a new generation of high-tech manufacturing and high-paying jobs; a future where we’re in control of our own energy; and our security and prosperity aren’t so tied to unstable parts of the world.
Think about the XXXXX within our reach: XXXXX that leads the world in XXXXX; XXXXX that attracts a new generation of XXXXX; a future where we’re in control of our own XXXXX; and XXXXX.
超棒的用在開頭段,表明多方的觀點。
They understood they were part of something larger, that they were contributing to a story of success that every American had a chance to share: the basic American promise that if you worked hard, you could do well enough to raise a family, own a home, send your kids to college, and put a little away for retirement.
They understood they were part of something larger, that they were contributing to a story of success that XXXXX: the basic XXXXX promise that if XXXXX, you could do well enough to XXXXX, XXXXX, XXXXX, and XXXXX.
表明XXXXX的作用,以及好處。
We can either settle for a country where a shrinking number of people do really well, while a growing number of Americans barely get by, or we can restore an economy where everyone gets a fair shot, and everyone does their fair share, and everyone plays by the same set of rules.
We can either settle for a country where XXXXX, while a growing number of XXXXX, or we can restore an society where everyone gets a fair shot, and everyone does their fair share, and everyone plays by the same set of rules.
【超好的用于公平的主題】用于論證段,談及這么做的好處。
And it plunged our economy into a crisis that put millions out of work, saddled us with more debt, and left innocent, hard-working Americans holding the bag.
And it plunged our XXXXX into a crisis that put millions XXXXX, saddled us with more XXXXX, and left innocent, hard-working XXXXX in the depth of despair.
用于論證段,將主題進行擴展,論證做XXXXXX的壞處
Building a world-class transportation system is part of what made us an economic superpower.
Building a world-class XXXXX is part of what made us an XXXXX superpower.
寫得十分到位的,用句論證段或者首尾段,講做XXXXX的好處
And I want to cut through the maze of confusing training programs so that from now on people like Jackie have one program, one website, and one place to go for all the information and help that they need.
And XXXXX want to build up the plan of XXXXX so that from now on people like XXXXX have one program, one website, and one place to go for all the information and help that they need.
太贊了,簡單易用,用于論證段,將主題進行擴展,講做XXX的好處。
For less than 1 percent of what our nation spends on education each year, we’ve convinced nearly every state in the country to raise their standards for teaching and learning, the first time that’s happened in a generation.
For less than 1 percent of what our nation spends on education each year, we’ve convinced nearly every XXXXX in the country to raise their standards for teaching and learning, the first time that’s happened in a generation.
【用于教育主題】令人感動啊!超喜歡的!只需修改一處!講發(fā)展教育的好處
We also know that when students don’t walk away from their education, more of them walk the stage to get their diploma.
XXXXX also know that when XXXXX don’t walk away from their XXXXX, more of them walk the stage to get their XXXXX.
用于任意一段,將做XXXXX事情帶來的好處。
After all, innovation is what America has always been about.
After all, XXXXX is what human has always been about.
用于3-4段,提出自己的分論點。
And, by the way, it was public research dollars — over the course of 30 years — that helped develop the technologies to extract all this natural gas out of shale rock, reminding us that government support is critical in helping businesses get new energy ideas off the ground.
And, by the way, it was XXXXX — over the course of 30 years — that helped develop the technologies to XXXXX, reminding us that XXXXX is critical in helping XXXXX.
很有歷史感的一句話,用于任意一段,講做XXXXX的事情的長期的好處
But I will not walk away from the promise of clean energy.
But I will not walk away from XXXXX.
用于任意一段,表示堅決支持XXXXX
It’s time to end the taxpayer giveaways to an industry that rarely has been more profitable and double down on a clean energy industry that never has been more promising.
It’s time to end the XXXXX to XXXXX that rarely has been more profitable and double down on XXXXX that never has been more promising.
太贊了!親一口先!用于最后一段,表明反對XXXXX。
在這里,小編請各位考友注意,這些內(nèi)容是特別為23分以上,有很好的鑒賞能力,準備沖擊作文滿分的考友準備的素材,當你在20分以下的時候,請在專人指導下使用,否則很容易強擼灰飛煙滅!