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88. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Telephones and email have made communication between people less personal. Usespecific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

Topic 88 Telephone communication

Sincethe beginning of humankind people need to communicate with each other. Afterthe development of languages and thanks to the incredible ability of mankind toadvance, nowadays we enjoy the use of many different types of communication.Letters, the Internet, or telephone allows us to communicate freely with therest of the world.

In spiteof above mentioned, I agree with the statement that new types of communicationshave made contacts between people less personal.

Unfortunately,the technology age we live in forces us to adopt the contemporary way ofcommunication, which is almost impersonal. While hurrying to work more and more,chasing our aims, or focusing only on money making, practically we haveforgotten that one of our primary social needs is to communicate face-to-face.To save time we often prefer to send an email or to make a phone call

than tohave a simple face-to-face talk with our friends or parents, for example.

Furthermore,those types of impersonal communications will sooner or later place us intoisolation. Nowadays, we are often afraid to make new acquaintances; we have troublesto express ourselves when we communicate face-to-face; or we experiencedifficulties to hold an informal conversation. What is more, we find mucheasier to communicate with other people by email and phone.

Not onlydo we forget about our simple role as social members but we also do not enjoyit as we did before. Modern technology has made connections between people soimpersonal that we are at the threshold of a new single world culture. Thisfact gives the answer to the question why so many people of our generation arevictims of the illness called loneliness.

Althoughtelephones and the Internet have made contacts between people much more easier,our virtual friends will remain virtual and a simple call will not substitute thehours we can spend with our families. Therefore, I truly believe that nothingcan replace personal, face-to-face communication between people.

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