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Morning~AmyLee要認真規劃好備考的每一天，你呢！非常感謝大家的陪伴，我們YY可可備考小組的成員越來越多了，不許偷懶，托福優秀范文一天寫一篇學一篇哦，寫好了可以發送至我郵箱keke3096@qq.com進行互批，共同進步!^^
我已經托福三戰過了，對考試各方面都很熟悉，所以大家到考前了有什么疑惑也可以發郵件給我，我會盡力為大家解答。
每天的寫作任務是這樣的，寫好每天的作文發至我的郵箱（如果你想加入作文批改小組請注明），我們將進入互批作文模式。在此我對每天的topic進行解析和范文精講，請大家寫完作文之后不忘進行比較，找出自己的不足之處。開始吧！
87. What discovery in the last 100 years has been most beneficial for people in your country? Use specific reasons and examples tosupport your choice.
參考分析： 這是一道比較自由的題目，可以隨意發揮。比如：發現很多油田（經濟意義、政治意義、社會意義）；發現必須改革開放(reform and open; reform and open to the outside world; reform and open up; reform and openness◇改革開放政策the policy of reformation and opening)；發現計劃經濟(planned economy)體制(planning system)有問題；等等 |
87、中國發現石油 |
Topic 87 An important discovery in the last 100 years
I thinkthe most important discovery that has been the most beneficial for people in mycountry is the invention of the Internet. So far as I can tell, the Internethas been beneficial to people around the globe. My view is a commonsense one,based on the fact that the Web is a vast storehouse of information andopinions, which can be of science, literature, politics, sports or even, sex.Anyone with access to a computer and a dialup connection can unlock the doorand trawl through its offerings.
TheInternet can be used as a broad base of knowledge that contributes to theeducational system. Students and teachers benefit from the use of the Internet,as well as administrators and others outside of formal education. Studentsbenefit because the Internet provides a resource to supplemental informationfor any subject. Educators benefit because the Internet provides a vastknowledge base to prepare for teaching topics. People are not only learningfrom the Internet, they are contributing and sharing knowledge throughnetworked communities. The Internet is the advancement of education for all itsusers.
TheInternet is changing the way we do business. The Internet can deliver bettercustomer services to people. Using Internet broadcasting, we are able to targetthe right audience, prepare and present a technical presentation on a populartopic, interact with new customers, and collect hundreds of highly qualifiedleads. As Internet companies continue to find innovative ways to leverage thecapabilities of the Internet for businesses, the more we will learn how toprovide optimal solutions for customers. Which in turn, will greatly benefitpeople.
TheInternet today is a way to transfer and share information. On the whole, it isa benefit to individuals of all kinds. We do have problems surrounding theInternet that need to be solved, but aswith all new technologies there are debates and opinions. Since the Internettechnology is spreading, it will soon become as popular as all other forms ofcommunication. If you have not tried it, do so.
好了，今天就說這么多，大家一定要堅持練習作文，每天進步一小點，一個月下來托福寫作絕對是質的提升！希望大家跟著我每天一篇練下去，寫作都是硬功夫，跟小時候每周都要寫語文作文是一樣的，功夫到家自然成，加油！
最后再mention一下互評作文的事情，這個作文互評目前只有我在做，我希望盡可能給有需要的可可粉們提供幫助，如果你們中有愿意跟我一起批改大家作文的，一定要mail我加入哦！（互批可以進步非常快，做過才知道！）
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