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In the remainder of the paragraph, provide explanations, evidence, examples or personal experiences to build on an extended idea.
然后在接下來的段落中進(jìn)行解釋，列舉證據(jù)、例子或個人經(jīng)歷來支持并拓展該段的主要論點(diǎn)。
Connecting show the relationship between your paragraphs in sentences by using a wide range of linking words or phrases appropriately.
使用恰當(dāng)、豐富的連接詞或短語來連接段落句子，并闡明他們之間的關(guān)聯(lián)。
See our accompanying download for different examples.
請參看我們提供下載的附加資料。
They are usually these types: introducing ideas, having similar ideas, contrasting ideas,
連接詞的作用主要有這幾種：提出觀點(diǎn)、補(bǔ)充說明類似觀點(diǎn)、對比不同觀點(diǎn)、
giving examples or evidence, explaining results, sequencing, providing explanations, sharing your experience, drawing conclusions, introducing your opinions.
列舉例子或證據(jù)、闡釋結(jié)果、排列順序、解釋說明、分享經(jīng)歷、得出結(jié)論、提出自己的觀點(diǎn)等。
Linking can be done in a variety of other ways, for instance, through referencing by using pronouns.
連接上下文的方法多種多樣，例如使用代詞。
"Firstly I'm very happy to receive this award.
「首先，獲得這個獎項我感到十分高興。
Additionally, I would like to thank my colleagues, without them they wouldn't be standing here accepting this."
另外，我想感謝我的同事，如果沒有他們，我就不會站在這里領(lǐng)獎。」
And also using substitution: "famous people deserve a private life, but celebrities also sell newspapers".
還可以進(jìn)行替換，比如：「名人需要私生活，但報道名流軼事才能吸引眼球」。
As you practice writing essays, review your writing and circle the different linking devices.
練習(xí)雅思寫作時，可通篇回顧文章，圈出所采用的連接手段。
Then think about how you could use different words to avoid repetition.
并思考是否可以使用其他的詞匯以避免重復(fù)。
Don't overuse linking words or phrases however, this becomes irritating for the reader.
不要過多使用連接詞和短語，否則文章讀起來會惹人生厭。
The key in using linking words is appropriacy.
所以，恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂檬顷P(guān)鍵所在。
Ask yourself, is this necessary and doesn't match the content that follows?
用詞之前應(yīng)該先問自己，這個詞是否是必須的？是否適用于接下來的內(nèi)容？
For more information, please see are other writing test videos: task achievement, lexical resources and grammatical range inaccuracy.
若想了解其他三項評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，請觀看其他雅思寫作考試備考短片：寫作任務(wù)完成情況、詞匯豐富性、語法多樣性以及準(zhǔn)確性。
