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So you've decided to take the IELTS exam, congratulations! Success starts with IELTS.
感謝選擇報考雅思考試，這將成為你成功的起點。
Here we look at the criteria of coherence and cohesion.
在該短片中，我們將介紹「連貫性與銜接性」。
This is one of four criteria on which your writing will be assessed.
這是雅思寫作考試四項評分標準之一。
Look for other three criteria videos.
我們會在其他短片中分別介紹另外三項評分標準。
Coherence refers to the flow of your writing.
連貫性指文章的流暢程度，
Your idea should be logically organized and appropriately sequenced into paragraphs so they are easy to understand and follow.
文章的觀點應該邏輯清楚，段落結構恰當， 以易于理解和把握。
Cohesion refers to linking words that help you connect ideas and show the relationship between paragraphs, sentences, or parts of sentences.
銜接性指連接詞的使用，其有助于整合觀點，并闡明段落、句子或句子成分之間的關系。
So this criteria looks at how a writing test the answer is organized and how to link information and ideas.
因此，該評分標準旨在考查考生組織文章以及連接信息和觀點的能力。
Here is one simple way to sequence ideas for effective coherence for this Task 2 essay,
在作文2中，可以采用一種簡單的方式梳理文章觀點。
for example, "The threat of nuclear weapons maintains world peace.
例如，題目是“核武器威脅實際上維持了世界和平。
Nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy.
核能提供了低價清潔的能源。
The benefits of nuclear technology far outweigh the disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree? "
核科學技術的利遠大于弊。你如何看待這一觀點？”
Introduction: paraphrase question and include your opinion.
開頭：轉述題目，提出你的觀點。
Body paragraphs: arguments for nuclear technology.
正文段落：列舉支持核技術的論點。
Body paragraphs: against regular technology.
正文段落：列舉反對核技術的論點。
Conclusion: paraphrase your opinion.
結論：改述你的觀點。
Plan your essay like this before you start writing.
寫作前，參照上述格式列出寫作提綱。
It's important to use paragraphs. These give structure to a piece of writing.
由于文章的結構是由段落劃分的，所以分段非常重要。
Think of paragraphs as a signpost telling, whoever read your work where your ideas were going and when you were moving on to a different point.
要將段落作為文章的重要標識，讓讀者了解你如何展開闡述一個觀點，并告知讀者你何時開始進入下一個論點。
Since paragraphs are used to explain your argument in stages, express one idea or set of ideas in each paragraph.
鑒于段落有助于階段性地解釋文章論點，因此在每一個段落中，請闡述一個觀點或一組觀點。
A good way to start a paragraph is with the short simple sentence that introduced the main idea of the paragraph.
在開始新段落時，使用簡潔明了的句子提出本段的主要觀點，這不失為一個明智的選擇。
Teachers often called this a topic sentence.
老師們通常稱這句話為「主旨句」。
