2014年7月19日雅思寫作解析以及原創范文
　　7月19日雅思大作文回憶：健康類(遺漏話題)
　　Some people believe that the government have the duty to ensure its citizens have a healthy diet，while others believe that it is individuals' responsibility to care for their diet and health?Discuss both sides and give your opinion?有人認為政府有責任保障公民有健康飲食，有人認為個人有責任關注個人飲食和健康，討論兩種觀點，給出你的意見?
　　點評：托福也有討論兩種觀點的提問
　　思路拓展：
　　1. 政府加強對于食品安全的監管力度
　　2. 政府加強教育，提高民眾的健康飲食的意識
　　3. 個人提高健康飲食的意識：多吃水果蔬菜，避免過度的糖分，脂肪，熱量的攝入
　　4. 個人養成規律的每日鍛煉的習慣，增強自己的免疫力;愉悅心情;緩解壓力
　　主題觀點：政府和個人應該是協同努力，最重要的責任在于個人
　　原創范文：
　　首段：背景介紹 + 作家立場：
　　To lead a wholesome and active life might be the dream of every individual, unfortunately, busy pace of modern life sometimes deprives us of personal health. Happiness lies, first of all, in health. Health enables us to brave career challenges and harmonize family life. This essay aims to prove that a healthy diet derives from the efforts made by the government and everyone：
　　二段：談及政府如何保障人們的健康飲食
　　TV commercials and various ads are the underlying reasons of unhealthy dietary habit. After watching different vivid food ads on fast-foods, fried foods and carbonated beverage, unwise consumers will unavoidably be swayed by those negative propagandas. Imaginably, too much eating of cheese, ice cream, salty snacks and meat is physically detrimental. By that I mean, obesity or over-nutrition are now agonizing many families. Hence, it is the unshakable obligation of the government to ensure its citizens’ health. To illustrate, American government had formulated policies restricting the bundle sales of fast foods aiming at children. New Zealand government had enacted legislations imposing a heavy tax upon alcohol buyers and cigarette purchasers.
　　點評：American government had formulated policies restricting the bundle sales of fast foods aiming at children. 美國政府立法禁止銷售針兒童捆綁銷售快餐
　　點評：New Zealand government had enacted legislations imposing a heavy tax upon alcohol buyers or cigarette purchasers . 新西蘭政府對于煙酒消費者加大收稅力度
　　三段：從飲食和鍛煉角度談及對于健康的利好：
　　Nonetheless, the increased awareness of healthier lifestyle has made plenteous modern people alter their adverse dietary habits and render more concerns over their personal health management. Principally, I myself usually eat a lot of fresh fruits and vegetables. As a great-believer of the saying, “you are what you eat”, I, in most cases, try to avoid too much intake of high fat, sugar and calorie so that my good health can be ensured. After all, it is a hard truth that fruits and vegetables are high in nutritional value because they contain various beneficial vitamins. Likewise, doing some regular physical exercise is a must in the interests of our health. People can easily strengthen their immune system and thus enhance their health index. More precisely, taking up various physical exercises help players relieve their strains and relax their moods. A reportage is persuasive enough to support my point. The scientific research conducted by top medical organizations has found that if a person can do corporal exercises one hour per day， then, it is likely that he could cope with career tasks at least fifty years and enjoy prolonged lifespan.
　　尾段：再次亮明觀點：健康需要政府和個人的協同努力
　　People suffer from a variety of health-related problems at times, however careful they are of their health. To make sure that we remain as healthy as possible, joint efforts have to be made by the government and most importantly ourselves.
　　全文點評：文無定法，原創范文只是雅思寫作之一種。本文摒棄模板，自由寫作。主題明確，邏輯清晰，論證飽滿，詞匯亮點，句法多變。大量語料庫來著閱讀，應該是7.5分以上的高分范文。
　　原創語料庫：
　　1. lead a disciplined life v過一種有規律的生活
　　2. maintain healthy = keep fit v保持健康
　　3. health-enhancing adj 改善健康的：
　　4. You are what you eat: 人類要吃得健康，以保重健康身體.
　　5. enhance people’s health index v提高健康指數
　　6. avoid the intake of carbonated beverage v 避免碳酸飲料的攝入
　　7. wholesome = healthy = sound adj 健康的
　　8. The country will benefit because energetic citizens will inject new life into the further development of nation. 國家會受益，因為精力充沛的公民會為國家發展注入新鮮活力(健康飲食對于國家的利好)
　　9. draw on v利用……(推薦使用)
　　10. ……have a balanced diet v飲食平衡
　　11. ……is high in nutritional value v營養價值高
　　12. strengthen one’ s immune system v 提高免疫力
　　13. be accountable for = be responsible for 對于……負責
　　14. The responsibility should be given to……責任歸結給……(8分作文語料庫)
　　15. Health is to every individual what air is to the earth. 健康對于人好像空氣對于地球;
　　16. keeping fit could instill confidence into one’s heart v保持健康有助于樹立自信(復習)
　　17. The increased awareness of healthier lifestyle has made plenteous modern people alter their adverse dietary habits and render more concerns over their personal health. 漸漸認識到健康的生活方式的重要性，很多現代人改變了他們不量的飲食習慣，更加注重個人健康。
　　18. Happiness lies, first of all, in heath 健康是幸福生活的本源