2014年5月24日雅思寫作題目：
　　Many young people leave school with a negative attitude. What are the reasons? How can we encourage young people to study?
　　原創(chuàng)范文賞析：
　　首段：背景介紹 +　寫作目的
　　Alarmingly，there is a growing trend that the beginning of career indicates the end of academic study. Currently,plenteous people slacken their efforts at self-improvement and hold a negative attitude towards lifelong learning when stepping into society. This essay aims to investigate the reasons why so many people take less interest in updating their knowledge and then present my recommendations.
　　翻譯：令人擔憂的是，一種趨勢就是事業(yè)的開始意味著學習生涯的結束。很多人放松努力，對于學習態(tài)度消極。本文目的皆在于探究下為何很多年輕人對于自身充電學習態(tài)度消極，再提出解決策略。
　　點評：文無定法;本文開篇沒有寫作問題的影響：
　　二段：原因的展開(客觀上 + 主觀上)
　　The underlying reasons why some school leavers hold cold attitudes towards study are manifold. Here, some of them will be explored. First, their indifferent attitude towards study can be mainly ascribed to ever-accelerating pace of modern life and heavy workload. Nowadays, numerous employees are too occupied to spend time in updating their knowledge. Further, the core of life has shifted from pursuing academic triumph to enjoying family life. More precisely, as for those who have got married and started career, they may think that it is better to take good care of family members and focus on work. Last, some relevant enterprises’ less emphasis on lifelong learning is also the root cause of modern people’s laziness in acquiring new knowledge.
　　翻譯：企業(yè)新鮮人對于持續(xù)學習態(tài)度消極原因很多，文本探究一些根源。第一，快節(jié)奏的生活和繁重的工作壓力是原因，很多人過于繁忙沒有時間充電學習。第二，生活重心轉(zhuǎn)移，人們不再追求學業(yè)成功，而是開始享受家庭生活，對于成家立業(yè)者來說，很多人認為照顧家庭和發(fā)展事業(yè)更加重要。第三，企業(yè)對于終生學習沒有足夠重視，這也是人們懶惰，疏遠更新知識的根源。
　　點評：
　　core n核心;
　　get married and start career v 成家立業(yè)(推薦背誦)
　　update one's knowledge v 充電學習(推薦背誦)
　　三段：解決的策略;
　　Given the severity of people’s cold attitude towards learning, some feasible measures need to be taken. First, it is imperative for every individual to cultivate his or her study interest via partaking of training programs or self-study.Also, those enterprises are supposed to provide their staff with more study opportunities and reward the employees with competitive academic qualifications. To make the final point, mass media could publicize those who set fine examples for lifelong learning. Meanwhile, it works to advocate self-improvement and create academic atmosphere.
　　翻譯：考慮到人們對于學習態(tài)度消極的嚴重性，應該采取一些措施。第一，個人通過參加培訓課程和不斷自修來培養(yǎng)學習興趣很重要。第二，企業(yè)應該給員工提供學習的機會，獎勵有更高的學歷的員工。第三，媒體應該宣傳學習的標桿，同時，提倡自我進步和創(chuàng)造良好的學習氛圍很重要。
　　點評：it works to do sth 做……是起作用的
　　尾段：
　　Overall, it is no easy task to maintain the lifelong zeal of learning, yet, study is a lifelong enterprise. Only when the above-mentioned measures are adopted can youngsters build up the habit of constant self-improvement
　　翻譯：保持終生學習的樂趣絕非易事，但是，學習是終生的事業(yè)，只有采取我提及的策略，年輕人才能建立終生學習的習慣。
　　點評：zeal = passion = enthusiasm n 熱情