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下面是2013年2月2日雅思寫作真題點評，供考生們參考，以下是詳細內(nèi)容。
2013年2月2日雅思寫作真題點評
| 題目 | What are the positive and negative effects of watching TV on children? 孩子們看電視的優(yōu)缺點。 |
| 開頭段 【背景句】 | As children have less time and opportunities to participate in outdoor activities, the influence of sedentary activities, such as watching television, has always been brought into the spotlight. |
| 中間段1 | 優(yōu)點：
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| 中間段2 | 缺點：
【論證示范】 The reasons are twofold. For one thing, if children spend an inordinate amount of time on watching TV, they will have less time for sports. For another thing, children tend to consume large quantities of junk food while watching TV.As a result, their physical health will be undermined.
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| 結(jié)尾段 | In conclusion, though television watching can contribute to the Children’s development at certain degree, the risks in children’s physical and mental health will make more parents have second thoughts about their children’s television viewing. |
