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小作文：柱狀圖，84年、94年、04年，the bar chart shows the rating of five factors for a good manager in three separate years.
寫作思路：動態圖表，按照時間順序描述趨勢，按照factor的順序做對比。
大作文：Some people think all lawbreakers should be taken into prison, others believe that there are better alternatives. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
寫作思路：
第一段：如果對待罪犯：監獄還是其他措施?
第二段：監獄的作用
1. 保證社會安全
2. 警示他人
但是：耗費資源多，罪犯出獄后難以重新進入社會
第三段：其他措施包括教育，職業培訓，工作
1. 可以幫助出獄后經濟獨立，防止重復犯罪
2. 認識到自己對社會的價值，提高自尊自信
第四段：我不否認監獄的作用，但是如果沒有教育和工作的幫助，罪犯難以徹底得到改造。
As repeated crimes occur increasingly, how to reform criminals has given rise to a debate. Certainly prison is the place for them to be punished and reformed. But other measures are also needed to achieve an optimal result for them and the society as well.
It is undeniable that putting criminals into prison would contribute to a lower crime rate.Primarily, as offenders are isolated from the society when they are in prison, they cannot threaten the social security any more. Longer prison term would also be a serious warning forpotential criminals However, this way of punishment means that more prisons and man power as well as other resources are required, which can be a huge cost for the government. Besides, after being isolated from the society for a really long time, offenders would find it very hard to re-entrythe society and this may force them to commit crime again.
Hence, it is better to find alternative ways to deal with criminals. Vocational training and academic education aimed at prisoners are promising ones. These measures could help equip those behind bars with job skills and become independent economically after they are set free. They would find the opportunity to escape the cycle of violence and poverty utterly. For those criminals with special talents, working is a better way to reform them because they may have chance to realize their value to the society and regain self-respect and self-confidence. Theseapproaches would make a difference in criminal rehabilitation, and generate a better effect than simply throwing offenders behind the iron bars.
Overall, I do not deny the function of prison in punishing felons and deterring crime. However this cannot turn them into law abiding members without the aid of other measures, such as education, training and working.
