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小作文：曲線圖, 比較音樂時尚體育三種雜志幾年間的銷量。
寫作思路：參照劍6test 1,或劍7test 2
大作文：The most important thing of people's life is his or her work. Without satisfying career, the life is meaningless. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
寫作思路：
第一段：討論的話題是工作的重要性
第二段：工作的確很重要
1 提供生活的保障
2體現個人的社會價值
3 發現與完善自我的方式
第三段：工作不是生活的全部
1 人生包括工作和家庭生活，個人愛好等
2 工作需要與生活其他方面平衡。如果過度強調工作，生活也會失去意義
第四段：工作很重要，但不是唯一的人生目的
Many of us in modern society devote much more time in working life than our parent generation, which means it plays a vital role in our life. However, has it come to a point that it has taken over our life? This is the question that requires a close examination.
No one can deny the importance of work to a person. Our physical and mental energy needs a channeland the effort in a vocation is the best one. Employment not only provides us income and supports us and our families economically, it also helps us establish our self-esteem and pride when we see our job as an opportunity to make a contribution to our community. In other words, we fulfill our social value through a job. More importantly, work can be the creative means of finding and improving ourselves because work is like a mirror reflecting our thoughts and behavior patternsand we can see ourselves in it.
However, the belief that occupational endeavor makes our life meaningful and rewarding does not necessarily lead to the assumption that without a satisfying career, life is meaningless. Life is not only about work. Instead, there are many other factors that influence our well-being. Family life, personal hobbies, religious pursuit, the nurture of friendship and even rest and recreationalso contribute to our happiness. If these aspects are not in balance with working life, there can be little chance to embrace a successful career. Those who overly focus on career tend to agonizeover some problems, such as health issues, fear of failure, disorientation of life, materialismand so forth.
My personal view is that while work is an important part of life, it is not the only thing we have to do in our life. There are other things we can enjoy. The key is the balance between working and personal life which helps us take the most advantage of our mundane life.
