(1)變成兩個簡單句:
The wind was blow ing very hard. They couldn't go boating on t he lake.
(2)變成并列句,用逗號加并列連接:
The wind was blowing very hard they couldn't go boating on t he lake.
(3)變成并列句,用分號連接:
The wind was blowing very hard; couldn't go boating on t he lake.
(4)變成并列句,用分號加連接性副連接:
The wind was blowing very hard,therefore, they couldn't go boating on lake.
(5)變成并列句,有時也可以用冒接,這時第二個分句解釋說明第一個分句
They couldn't go boating on the lake; the wind was blowing very hard.
(6)變成復合句:
As the wind was blowing very hard they couldn't go boating on t he lake.
(7)用獨立主格結構改寫句子:
The wind blowing very hard, they couldn't go boating on t he lake.
如果大家在詞匯和語法有一定累積的基礎上,再避免出現中式英語的東西,加上觀點的正確性,我想那些基礎差的考生想拿到寫作六分,應該可以如愿以償的。最后祝愿大家在新的一年里,能夠順利通過雅思考試,拿到心中的分數。