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“見官死”開頭之三：觀點(diǎn)模糊 態(tài)度曖昧(噴血指數(shù)：☆☆☆)
典型失敗案例：
Topic: Should college students be allowed to get married?
I think this topic is very hard to say. Because I am still very little, only 17, and not married, so this topic is very difficult for me...
“見官死”開頭之四：偏離主題 無軌電車(噴血指數(shù)：☆☆☆☆)
典型失敗案例：
Topic: It is said that nowadays one can not acquire the qualifications and quality essential to success through university education. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement? (雅思真題)
I think to success, we must have a lot of important qualities. To have these important qualities, we must learn a lot of things, for example, English，music tools，and etc. We can learn these qualities from our teachers, our friends and from books. All in all, we can learn from many places.
“見官死”開頭之五：語法錯(cuò)誤 慘不忍睹(噴血指數(shù)：☆☆☆)
典型失敗案例：
Topic: If children behave badly，should their parents accept responsibility and also be punished?(雅思真題)
About this problem，my think is if children behave badly, then parents are not right. Because teach child is parent's responsibility. So we also punish parents too besides children is also should.
“見官死”開頭之六：過分簡(jiǎn)單 沒有重點(diǎn)(噴血指數(shù)：☆☆)
典型失敗案例：
Topic: The importance of environmental protection
This issue is surely very important，let's talk about it!
“見官死”開頭之七：用詞不當(dāng) 表達(dá)不準(zhǔn) (噴血指數(shù)：☆☆)
典型失敗案例：
Topic: Should college students be allowed to get married?
I think college students should not be allowed to get married because they are very young and so we can't take the responsibility to form a family.
