評論
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Violent films and computer games should be put out of business, if possible at all, because they can emotionally affect viewers, particularly children. It can be seen that violence remains one of the most problematic areas for censorship in many countries, especially when it is in conjunction with sex and drugs. So, the question is not why but how?
結(jié)尾三句 Conclusion: from specific to general
In conclusion, given that violent films and computer games can have adverse influence on society, it is probably not the right thing to outlaw such products completely. It is appropriate that public censorship should be effectively applied, where necessary, so as to prevent young criminal minds. Consequently, the only solution left for now seems to be a rating system that draws a line for R18: restricted for age 18 and over.
中體兩段的來龍去脈
Even though people read the news using the Internet nowadays, newspapers still are an important source of information for the general public. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
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報紙業(yè)與英特網(wǎng)的沖突
造18句起3承6轉(zhuǎn)6合3。多寫幾句怕是時間不足，少寫幾句怕是字?jǐn)?shù)不夠。
開頭三句排列1-2-3前呼結(jié)尾三句18-17-16的后應(yīng)，句子次序顛倒。
承段的中心招牌句與轉(zhuǎn)段的中心招牌句來龍自起段第3句，又去脈到合段第16句。
第5-6-7-8-9句支持第4句：承段的招牌句。
第11-12-13-14-15句支持第10句：轉(zhuǎn)段的招牌句。
第3句把沖突的焦點分成兩個招牌句，承段第4句與轉(zhuǎn)段第10句。
兩個招牌句重合在合段第16句。
起段三句話
1.申論主題 This age is one in which the popularity of the Internet is ruining everything in the information industries, particularly newspapers.
2. 集中焦點 It is likely that before very long newspapers will never again be considered seriously as an important source of stories for the general public.
3. 一分為二 What do you say about a modern invention that is providing you with more information more quickly and for free?
承段六句話
4. 招牌句 Because the current generations choose their news online at no cost, newspaper readership is getting smaller and smaller.
5. This is an indicator that print circulations are in for further decline, probably to an eventual fall world-wide.
6. It used to be that the newspaper industry was one of the most profitable businesses, selling a great number of copies and charging handsome fees for any sort of advertising, big or smaewll.
7. Once upon a time, news consumers were eagerly expecting newspapers to arrive at the door-step first thing in the morning.
8. That was then and this is now when news is available 24/7 at a click.
9. With the possible exception of free television broadcasts rivaling on the screen, webpages have far and widely outdone printed pages in global and local news supply.
轉(zhuǎn)段六句話
10. 招牌句 What is more, readers are abandoning newspapers for Internet media outlets since webpages have a great deal more up-to-second information to deliver to the public.
11. Thus, if you still think that newspapers will continue to be an important source of information, think again.
12. It cannot fail to be noticed that the rise of the Internet is an unmistakable sign of the beginning of the end of all newspaper kingdoms across the world.
13. In this information age, young non-newspaper readers are heavy online news consumers while printed papers are too slow in coming to satisfy their news curiosities.
14. Predicting the destiny of newspapers is not unlike watching the sun setting on the horizon, never to rise again.
15. In short, newspapers are going out of business.
合段三句話
16. 二合為一 To be sure, the Internet is also destroying other information industries ranging from magazines to books to movies to music, but none has suffered as much as newspapers.
17. 還原焦點 Now that people can benefit so much from getting information via the Internet, the future of newspapers is shrouded in shadows.
18. 重申主題 Of course, that the Internet is for the better or for the worse in changing the way people read news may depend on who you ask.
