考官問道：what kind of qualities a good leader should have?

　　考生回答：

　　觀點1：A good leader should be passionate，

　　理由1：Because his passion will help him do well.

　　例子1：In business, a passionate boss can do his business better when he likes it.

　　觀點2：A good leader also should be like a model.

　　理由2：Because followers will all learn from their leader.

　　例子2：In Business, successful leadership is mainly about whether his employees work as hard as their boss does.

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　　觀點1（舊）：A good leader should be passionate.

　　觀點1（新）：successful leaders would probably be quite passionate and enthusiastic about what they do.

　　成功的領導人應該很可能是非常激情和熱情地對待他們所作的事情。

　　理由1（舊）：Because his passion will help him do well.

　　理由1（新）：Success comes easily when someone is obsessed with his career. He will be more relentless in the pursuit of his goals if he’s keen on his business. He will achieve his peak performance only when he’s doing the thing which interests him or something he cares about.

　　成功來得容易當一個人沉溺于他的職業，他會更加不停歇地追求他的目標如果他很喜歡他的生意，他將會到達頂峰表現只有當他做自己感興趣的事情和他在意的事情。

　　例子1（舊）：In business, a passionate boss can do his business better when he likes it.

　　例子1（新）：Entrepreneurs who succeed do not mind the fact that they are putting in 15 or 18 hours a day to their business because they absolutely love what they do.Success in business is all about patience and hard work, which can only be attained if someone is passionate and crazy with his tasks and activities. So, most of the time, the more passionate a man is, the more successful he can be.

　　成功的企業家不介意一個事實，他們每天工作15到18個小時僅僅因為他們絕對的喜歡他們所做的，只有當你對瘋狂的熱愛你的任務和活動的時候，你才會耐心和努力工作，這使你商業上成功。所以，大多數情況下，你越是激情，你就會越成功。

　　觀點2（舊）：A good leader also should be reliable.

　　觀點2（新）： True leaders should have trustworthiness built on good relationship with his followers.

　　真正的領導人應該由別人的信任，建立在他很好的人際關系。

　　理由2（舊）：because no one will work for the person who can not be trusted.

　　理由2（新）：the way they deal with people will lay the foundation for the strength of their groups. The stronger the relationship is, the stronger the subordinates’ trust and confidence is in their capabilities.

　　他們處理和人們的關系為他們隊的優點建立了基礎，這種關系越強，他的下屬的對他的信任和信心就越加成為他們的綜合能力。

　　例子2（舊）：In Business, successful leadership is mainly about whether his employees believe in their boss or not.

　　例子2（新）：Studies have shown that one fundamental basis of business leadership is the trust and confidence that employees have on their manager. Only when they have faith in their leader will they go through hell and high water for him and for the organization。

　　研究表明一個商業成功領導的基礎是他員工對經理的信任和信心，只有他們信任領導人時，他們才會跋山涉水為組織效力。