2012年12月22日英語六級考試作文解析
【試題】
Directions:
For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition entitled On maintaining trust following the outline below. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
On maintaining trust 論信任
這道題可以歸為問題解決型題目,下面是問題解決型專用模板:
(1) 提出問題或困境
In the process of social advancement, we often find ourselves in a dilemma. Recently the issue of 主題has aroused a lively debate.
(2) 分析問題或困境的原因
Quite a few reasons can account for this phenomenon:
First and foremost,
Furthermore,
Eventually,
(3) 提出問題解決方案
To sum up,
It is high time for us to
Therefore,
第一段:目的是引出作文的主題,常用方法為背景引出法,但引出背景的句子在考試現場很難及時寫出,即使寫出也難以保證語法正確,這樣話就可以使用一些有特色的背景句來迅速解決戰斗。(注意不要隨便用一些網上抄來的惡俗的句子如:With the development of technology and society, more and more people believe XXX is very, very important. Some people believe that XXX, other people believe that XXX, and I believe that XXX)。
In the process of social advancement, we often find ourselves in a dilemma. Recently the issue of the gradual loss of trust has aroused a lively debate.
第二段:闡述問題或困境的原因(2-3點),除了一些模板句,還要注意運用課上學習的高級句型和詞匯。
Quite a few reasons can account for this phenomenon: First and foremost, (and引導的并列句)a great number of people view trust as a high-priced option and(賓語從句+where引導的定語從句) they hold that in a society where deception, fraud and dishonest behavior abound, trusting others may only get hurt in return. Furthermore, this phenomenon can also be attributed to the absence of full communication among people. (with復合結構)With the pace of modern life quickening, individuals can barely have time to communicate with each other (副詞的平行并列結構)deeply and effectively.
第三段:主要目的是提出問題的解決方案,結構是先總結解決問題的重要性,然后再提出解決方案(1-2點)
To sum up, Mutual trust is conducive to the harmony of society. With trust among each other, folks are more likely to have a better understanding and communication, and thus reduce unnecessary conflicts and frictions.(形式主語)It is high time for us to pour close attention into the moral issue. Therefore, we should trust people as much as possible and try our utmost to influence those who do not trust people easily,(Doing做伴隨狀語)informing them of the significance of it.(倒裝句) Only in this way can live in a more harmonious world.
綜上所述,本次的作文題目難度適中,關鍵在于段落結構的設置,高分句型和詞匯的運用以及低級語法錯誤的規避,只要做到以上幾點,取得高分并非難事。