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熱點(diǎn)作文24
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Work with a Person or Work with a Machine? You should write at least 150 words and base your composition on the outline given below:
1)一些人喜歡和人打交道多的工作
2)然而也有一些人更愿意和機(jī)器打交道
3)你更喜歡哪種工作?為什么?
【思路點(diǎn)撥】
本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點(diǎn)要求指出人們的一種喜好，提綱第2點(diǎn)要求指出人們的另外一種喜好，提綱第3點(diǎn)要求“我”從中做出選擇，由此可判斷本文應(yīng)為對(duì)比選擇型作文。
根據(jù)所給提綱，本文應(yīng)包含以下內(nèi)容：指出人們對(duì)于工作的兩種喜好：喜歡和人打交道多的工作，喜歡和機(jī)器打交道多的工作;對(duì)比闡述兩種工作各自的特點(diǎn);表明“我”更喜歡哪種工作，并說明理由。
【參考范文】
Work with a Person or Work with a Machine?
When asked about work preference, different people will give different answers. Some people like working with people. However, others prefer jobs which mainly involve objects or machines.
Those people who have the first preference believe working with people usually makes one feel interesting and efficient. In addition, they maintain people can be inspired to bring forward new ideas by communicating or consulting with those around them. However, still others have different preferences. In their opinions, working with objects or machines can make one enjoy more peace and quiet. Besides, they argue, under such peaceful conditions, one can do more practical work, improve his skill and make technical renovations.
Weighing up these two kinds of work, I prefer working with people. For one thing, I like to cooperate with others and work in a team. For another, although there are competition and rivalry, we can learn something from other people. Considering these, I think, working with people is beneficial to our career development.
熱點(diǎn)作文25
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Body-building. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1)近年來越來越多的人開始參加各種健身俱樂部或健身中心
2)人們健身的目的有哪些
3)你對(duì)此的看法
【思路點(diǎn)撥】
本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點(diǎn)要求指出一種現(xiàn)象，提綱第2點(diǎn)要求說明人們熱衷于該現(xiàn)象的目的，提綱第3點(diǎn)要求談?wù)劇拔摇睂?duì)該現(xiàn)象的看法，由此可判斷本文應(yīng)為現(xiàn)象解釋型作文。
根據(jù)所給提綱，本文應(yīng)包含以下內(nèi)容：描述近年來人們熱衷于參加健身俱樂部或健身中心的現(xiàn)象;說明人們健身的主要目的;談?wù)劇拔摇睂?duì)健身的看法。
【參考范文】
Body-building
In recent years, more and more people spare no pains to join in the body-building group. People begin to take part in various fitness clubs or fitness centers in their spare time. This shows body-building has become an indispensable part of many people’s life.
Why are so many people keen on body-building? Firstly, keeping health is one of their main purposes. In modern society, many people stay for most of the day before the desk without doing any exercises, which definitely harms their health. Body-building caters to the need of these people who come to realize the potential danger of their working pattern. Secondly, body-building is beneficial for people to keep their body shape. Many setting-up exercises like aerobics are very helpful in cutting up weight. Besides, body-building is a good way by which people can release pressure.
As far as I am concerned, the popularity of body-building will be a long-time trend. It shows people begin to pay more and more attention to life quality. As a fashionable, healthy lifestyle, body-building will attract more and more people.
