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熱點作文21
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Online Romance. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1)隨著互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的普及，出現(xiàn)了很多網(wǎng)絡(luò)戀情
2)人們對此褒貶不一
3)你的看法
【思路點撥】
本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點要求指出一種現(xiàn)象，提綱第2點要求闡述人們對該現(xiàn)象所持的不同態(tài)度，提綱第3點要求表明“我”的看法，由此可判斷本文應(yīng)為對比選擇型作文。
根據(jù)所給提綱，本文應(yīng)包含以下內(nèi)容：描述網(wǎng)絡(luò)戀情的出現(xiàn)，引出人們對其的不同態(tài)度;對比闡述兩種態(tài)度各自的理由;表明“我”更傾向于哪種態(tài)度并說明理由。
【參考范文】
Online Romance
With the widespread of the Internet, there have appeared many online romances. The lovers meet over the Internet, date on the net and finally fall in love with each other. People’s opinions on it vary greatly.
Some people think online love is very romantic and exciting. It is an amazing thing that the Internet brings together two strange persons far away from each other. Moreover, they think that online romance, compared with realistic love, attaches more emphasis on the appeal to each other in spirit and involves less material conditions. However, many others think differently. In their eyes, the Internet is a virtual world, on which there impossibly exist real, enduring love since it is very difficult to tell the real from the fake by the Internet. Besides, they argue that pursuing online romance is sometimes very dangerous because there are many cheaters on the net.
As far as I am concerned, it is an easy and fast way for people to make new people by the Internet. However, people should have more protection and safety consciousness when making friends by the Internet. Don’t give out rashly your personal information to strangers on the net. And keep it in your mind that you should have more realistic knowledge of each other before starting a romance.
熱點作文22
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic How to Make the Best Use of College Life. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1)有的大學(xué)生在入學(xué)后尋找各種途徑去賺錢
2)有的大學(xué)生為應(yīng)付各種考試，經(jīng)常參加各種輔導(dǎo)班
3)你打算如何有效地利用你的大學(xué)時光
【思路點撥】
本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點和提綱第2點分別提出對待某問題的不同處理方式，提綱第3點要求談?wù)劇拔摇钡奶幚矸绞剑纱丝膳袛啾疚膽?yīng)為對比選擇型作文。
根據(jù)所給提綱，本文應(yīng)包含以下內(nèi)容：提出“如何有效利用大學(xué)時光”這一問題;闡述大學(xué)生主要將時間花在哪些方面和他們的主要考慮;談?wù)劇拔摇贝蛩闳绾卫梦业拇髮W(xué)時光和“我”的主要理由。
【參考范文】
How to Make the Best Use of College Life
It is beyond doubt that we enjoy more free time in college than in middle school. But as to how to make use of our spare time, different students hold sharply different views.
In order to earn money, a good number of undergraduates are busy doing part-time jobs. In this way, they can relieve their families’ financial burden to some extent. Besides, they can achieve more independence through their work. Others are confronted by countless exams and they often attend guidance lectures in the hope of improving their performance in these tests. They believe that a record of good exam results will be useful when they look for jobs in the future.
As far as I am concerned, I will live my college life in a different way. On the one hand, as a student, I will give priority to the development of my knowledge and skills, so I am determined to spend most of my spare time studying hard. On the other hand, I think it is necessary for me to join one or more of the student associations. These associations can provide chances to improve my communicating skills and make my life colorful. In conclusion, I do believe that my college life will turn out to be colorful as well as fruitful.
熱點作文23
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Young People Should Have Combatant Spirit. You should write at least 150 words and base your composition on the outline given below:
1)現(xiàn)在很多年輕人缺乏拼搏精神
2)導(dǎo)致這一問題的原因是什么
3)大學(xué)生應(yīng)該加強(qiáng)拼搏精神
【思路點撥】
本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點要求指出一個問題，指綱第2點要求分析導(dǎo)致該問題的原因，提綱第3點要求說明如何解決該問題，由此可判斷本文應(yīng)為問題解決型作文。
根據(jù)所給提綱，本文應(yīng)包含以下內(nèi)容：描述年輕人缺乏拼搏精神的現(xiàn)狀;分析導(dǎo)致這一問題的原因;說明大學(xué)生應(yīng)該如何加強(qiáng)拼搏精神。
【參考范文】
Young People Should Have Combatant Spirit
Nowadays, quite a few people believe that combatant spirit is essential for one’s success in today’s competitive world. However, some young people today think nothing of this spirit which，in their opinion, is only needed in revolutionary age. Even worse, when facing the difficulties, they will choose to yield or cower without making any efforts.
There are many factors resulting in young people’s lack of combatant spirit. Among these, comfortable living environment plays a vital role. Today’s parents provide nearly everything to the children, which results in the children’s lack of motivation for striving on their own. What’s more, the present education system does not pay much attention to help the young people build up the combatant spirit.
Considering the importance of combatant spirit, I think it is high time to take effective measures to strengthen young people’s combatant spirit. Above all, parents shouldn’t spoil their children and should ask their children to strive for what they intend to obtain. Moreover, schools should build a better environment for students to develop their struggle and aggressive spirit. Besides, young people themselves should adjust their minds and follow the examples of those people in history or around us who achieve their success under the stimulation of combatant spirit. In a word, it is an urgent thing for today’s young people to enhance combatant spirit.
