Part Ⅰ Writing (30 minutes)

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication. Your essay should start with a brief description of the picture. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

作文標(biāo)準(zhǔn)版

The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication

As is described in the picture, a father asks her daughter how her school today goes on. Instead of answering directly, the daughter tells her father to read her blog. It is common that youngsters nowadays incline to communicate with others on internet increasingly, and lack communication with people around them. With the development of Internet, it has influenced our society to a large extent, especially interpersonal communication.

To begin with, we can communicate with others anytime via internet. Otherwise, we would have to arrange our schedules strictly in advance. Also, interpersonal communication through the internet is not restricted by space. For example, in most multinational corporations, instant messages and video conferences help colleagues solve problems timely and efficiently. Last but not least, the internet can greatly speed up our interpersonal communication. Whereas, there are also disadvantages that the internet brings to us. More and more people complained that they have lost face-to-face communicating skills. As a result, people become more and more indifferent to each other in real life. Some netizens who are immersed in virtual world even have difficulty in making friends in reality.
In conclusion, communication through the internet could bring us both convenience and inconvenience. We should strike a balance between them and make the best of the internet.

【解析】

這次的六級(jí)寫(xiě)作是請(qǐng)考生談?wù)劸W(wǎng)絡(luò)對(duì)人際交流的影響。這個(gè)話(huà)題本身已是日常生活的熱點(diǎn)，考生并不陌生，有話(huà)可說(shuō)。

文章的展開(kāi)還是同過(guò)去的議論文寫(xiě)作一致。仍然可以用引入、闡釋有何影響和自己的觀(guān)點(diǎn)這樣的三段式進(jìn)行寫(xiě)作。在行文時(shí)，注意文章的層次和邏輯梳理，在談具體影響時(shí)，可適當(dāng)進(jìn)行對(duì)比論證，論證網(wǎng)絡(luò)出現(xiàn)和沒(méi)有網(wǎng)絡(luò)時(shí)，人際交流的差異，也可進(jìn)行結(jié)合自身經(jīng)歷進(jìn)行舉例論證。

本篇范文在句式上，長(zhǎng)短搭配，形式多變。從句、非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞等多種表達(dá)方式，值得借鑒。同時(shí)，用詞同樣注意多樣化，對(duì)網(wǎng)絡(luò)相關(guān)詞匯的多種表達(dá)（web, cyber, instant message, video conference等），考生同樣應(yīng)在平時(shí)注意歸類(lèi)、積累。

作文高分版

The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication

Today I saw an interesting cartoon, in which a father asked his daughter about her school performance of the day, and the daughter replied that he could go to her blog to check it. This small cartoon indicates a big change in our life, especially the way people communicate.

Internet enables people to break though the limitations of distance, strengthening social network. Unlike post offices, Internet service with its convenience helps people engage and converse real time with their parents, soul mates, friends though emails, IRC, micro blog anytime, anywhere with a network terminal, without suffering the long and painful wait for a reply.

Besides, such online communities as Twitter, Facebook are well under way and becoming the most dominating platforms for on-line social activities. These communities offer great opportunities for us to follow and interact with those we like and even those celebrities. It is also a platform for us to share and update information of each other, and learn the outside world.

Internet today and tomorrow is a virtual space where we live, where we learn, where we speak, and where we communicate.

【解析】

今年的六級(jí)作文依舊延續(xù)了四六級(jí)的傳統(tǒng)，考查“現(xiàn)象類(lèi)”話(huà)題，要求根據(jù)漫畫(huà)，發(fā)表對(duì)于“The impact of the internet on interpersonal communication”的觀(guān)點(diǎn)。近年的六級(jí)作文題目，已經(jīng)不再局限于傳統(tǒng)的議論文考察模式，即要求考生給出非此即彼或既此既彼的觀(guān)點(diǎn)、而是偏向于啟發(fā)考生自己去思考，結(jié)合自己的生活經(jīng)歷以及對(duì)事物的理解，對(duì)話(huà)題中的現(xiàn)象進(jìn)行深入的探討，給出事實(shí)支撐。