Computer and I By Simmy

　　I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that i indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music. That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me.

　　exceedingly 替換 very

　　thrilling 替換 exciting

　　sth. exert a tremendous fascination on sb 替換 sb. be interested in sth.

　　google 替換 search

　　an army of 替換 a lot of

　　The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers. Coincident with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals. It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure!

　　The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一個精彩句型，用來描述在某個時期發(fā)生了什么事情；

　　Increasing popularity 替換 more and more popular

　　Coincident with … 非常地道的詞匯，表達＂與…一致＂的意思，替換 With …

　　Advancement 替換 development

　　Pour into ( flood into / swarm into )替換 enter into

　　Current ( currently )替換 now

　　Appeal to sb. 替換 sb. be interested in sth.

　　Growing individuals 替換 more and more people

　　It is no exaggeration to say 經典句型，說某事是毫不夸張的

For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment . Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. Additionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering email.

　　For a start 替換 To begin with

　　We can, freely, search 用了插入語的寫作手法

　　our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. 用了非常精彩的被動