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下面給出寫好一篇作文的注意事項：
1.適當用被動代替主動，這樣能更客觀的反映事實, 句子開頭不要總是用we / I （比如寫結(jié)尾時不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to. ）舉個經(jīng)典結(jié)尾2004年六月六級作文的最后一段：It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that. Thus， its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively.
2.善于使用插入語，比如說把副詞、連接詞等，作插入語放在中間，一般放在主語、動詞或者助動詞后，兩邊分別加上逗號。
如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入語放在中間，一般放在動詞，助動詞后，兩邊分別加上逗號。
比如說： Other individuals, however, take the attitude that …
3. 一定要學會換詞，換形象，具體的代替太寬泛的。（考試中一般不要出現(xiàn)good, bad , many, thing, think, people, opinion 等等）比如上面例子中，applicable代替proper, approaches代替ways, implement代替carry out, sharpen one’’s competitive edge代替enhance one’’s competitiveness（提高某物競爭力）
