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考試吧版：
It is frequently observed that many people keep looking down at their mobile phones whatever they are doing. It is true that mobile phones have brought great convenience to us as we can send short messages, check e-mails, surf the Internet, or watch videos almost anywhere. However, the overuse of mobile phones also leads to some serious problems.
The over-dependence on mobile phones can harm the relationship among friends and family. With mobile phones, people do not talk as much as before. For example, sometimes at dinner tables, instead of chatting and laughing with each other, many people choose to chat with other friends online. In other words, mobile phones help people contacting friends far away more easily at the expense of reducing the communication with those who are sitting right next to them.
In conclusion, mobile phone can be a useful tool in modern life, but overusing it damages interpersonal relationship. There is no point to lose our intimacy with friends and family to modern technology.
點評：
本題漫畫探討手機的廣泛使用對人們生活的影響。話題貼近日常生活，難度中等。題目要求簡述手機在人們生活中越來越重要的角色，并解釋過度使用手機可能帶來的后果。
考生主要可以從以下幾個角度思考：
1. 對健康的危害;
2. 對人際關系的負面影響;
3. 對個人學習、發展的阻礙。
文都版1：
the Impact of the Mobile Phone in People’s Life
The thought-provoking drawing mirrors a common phenomenon in contemporary society that there is the negative influence of mobile phone. As is subtly shown in the picture，so many people are too much addicted to cell phones that they use walking sticks to see the road. What a meaningful cartoon!
It is to me that indulging in mobile phones produces native influences on body and mind. First and foremost, overusing mobile phones is detrimental to physical health for watching mobiles for a long stretch definitely impairs one’s eyesight. Suppose that a man is addicted in cell phones in whatever situation, it will be very disadvantageous for him to concentrate on his work, learning, or daily life and is very likely to hurt him. Furthermore, overusing cell phones adversely affects state of mind. An addict may stay inside his bubble instead of pursuing other endeavors, which eventually prevents the growth of think skills.
It is high time that we took effective measures to curb this trend. I cherish a belief that cell phones themselves are not good or bad and we can benefit a lot from it as long as we take a good control over them.
文都版2：
This cartoon reflects a provoking-thought social phenomenon ---- overusing the mobile phone in our lives. Even when crossing the street, people still keep looking at their mobile phone. Ironically, they use walking sticks in order to see. This is never an uncommon occurrence and exists here and there. Obviously, "Addition to Mobile Phone" has become a popular word these days.
The harmfulness of overusing mobile phone can be summarized as below. To begin with, it leads to countless health problems including short sight and autism. These diseases all have root causes in overusing cell phone. What’s more, the harmfulness is as much about our safety as it is about our health. The overusing mobile phone can change our lives patterns and overlook the danger around us.
Health experts are up in arms over the overusing the mobile phone. It is high time to change such uncool habit. Only in this way can we eradicate the risk of overusing cell phone.
