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　In recent years, floods of parents are willing to make arrangements and decisions for their children. And there’s no denying that a majority of children take their parents’ concern for granted. According to statistics, over 80% of parents still accompany their children to universities, even examinations. In this essay, I will discuss the measures that should be taken to help students be independent and offer my view on it.
First and foremost, parents should abandon the stereotyped role in Chinese parenting and render their children free to the fascinating world. Besides, they, the children themselves, should manage their own daily stuffs. In addition, the society should set up more courses and camps for children to cultivate their capability to be independent.
As far as I’m concerned, the all-covering parenting method may give rise to severe consequences, and a spoiled child won’t be competitive in this world, which is full of fierce competitions. Thus, the whole society should attach great importance to this problem and make our contribution to avoid this.

【寫作點評】

　　此次四級作文仍然是常考的議論文文體。屬我們課堂上練習的第一類議論文：現象解釋型議論文。所考題目為父母包辦一切熱點話題型，所以寫作套路基本上可以按照我們hot issue 型模板進行微調寫作。

　　此次應試作文在寫作時還需要注意以下幾點：

　　1、 文章directions 只有兩段，這樣按照平時的三段式作文的話，大家可以自由多加一段即可，比如在1和2之間加一個話題：比如父母包辦一切的原因；或者是此種做法帶來的后果等等。

　　2、 第一段在引入話題的時候，可以用我們課上所講畫面內容中譯英的方法，將大家首先想到的內容用英文表達出來。

　　3. 在講原因或者影響及措施時， 大家可以結合社會現實，家長溺愛孩子和現在的孩子獨立性差都表現在哪些方面，如：生活不能自理，甚至升學，進大學以后，更有甚者工作后的“啃老族”等等都可以寫，相應的措施也應從家長，社會及孩子本身等方面寫起。

　　4、就題目而言，independent 是四級高頻詞匯，在寫的過程中，一定不能在出新拼寫錯誤，那樣失分就可惜了。

　　此次作文整體話題特點仍然是越來越貼近實事，內容是大家關注的家庭教育方面。總體構架并不難，估計廣大考生在這次的作文中不會有太大失分！對于以后的四級寫作話題趨勢，希望考生還是可以關注教育類高頻詞匯，文章模板還是以解釋型議論文為主。