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Part ⅠWriting
【范文與點評】
The Popularity of Getting Certificates on Campus
①Currently, getting certificates is quite popular on campus. The advertisements for training schools occupy a large proportion of the bulletin board, and booksellers fill their shelves with many reference books. And eager students spare their money and time for these courses and books.
②There are several advantages in this matter. The biggest one is that with more certificates, students are accessible to more and better job opportunities. Besides, they can make more contacts with the outside world in the course of getting certificates.③However, every coin has two sides. The pursuit of certificates is no exception. Some students believe that ④the more certificates, the better.⑤One can hardly make progress this way, but can become bookish easily. Some of them even neglect their routine learning in the process of getting certificates.
From my viewpoint, certificates certify students’ previous efforts. ⑥But whether these pieces of paper can benefit students or not, depends on what they have really gained. Therefore, before dazzling choices, we must have a clear attitude and scientific strategy, and then certificates are beneficial.
①開門見山，說明這種現(xiàn)象的存在，接下來，作者從學校海報欄的廣告，書店經(jīng)營者和學生三方面來進一步說明該現(xiàn)象。
②首先論述其優(yōu)點，并用了一些連接詞表明句與句之間的關(guān)系。該部分的結(jié)構(gòu)是There are several advantages...The biggest one ...Besides,...。
③接下來論述的是其存在的缺點，并用However表示轉(zhuǎn)折。
④The +形容詞比較級，the +形容詞比較級，表示“越…，越…”。學會使用這種結(jié)構(gòu)能讓文章增色不少。
⑤這個句子用了hardly和easily，形成鮮明的對比，給人印象深刻。
⑥本句結(jié)構(gòu)whether...or not 引出本文觀點。
