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For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment . Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. Additionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering email.
For a start 替換 To begin with
We can, freely, search 用了插入語的寫作手法
our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. 用了非常精彩的被動
Additionally 替換 In addition / Besides
Deliver 替換 send
There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, in a way, especially the growing violence ,***, porn pictures, AV-films emerging on the screen , which leads quiet a few net citizens to copying.
There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, 這個句子有三個精彩之處，首先There is no denying that這個句型，還有however作為插入語， function in the disservice of 替換 do harm to
Emerging 替換 appearing ( fading 替換 disappearing )
Net citizen 網(wǎng)民，屬于精彩用詞
As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds. Computers do play a positive role in the development of people' lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts. We should ,therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.
No garden has no weeds 替換 Every coin has two sides
Computers do play ，do 強(qiáng)調(diào)
Positive 替換 important / good 等
A slice of 替換 a part of
Unfavorable 替換 bad
Impacts 替換 effects / influences
We should, therefore, take advantage of … 使用插入語
