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第一節(jié)
必須改正的語法錯(cuò)誤:
1.詞性 success n succeed v
2.單復(fù)數(shù)：電腦很有用 Computers are very useful
3.冠詞
4.時(shí)態(tài)：作文基本上以現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。
5.代詞一致
例：
If we cheat others, friends will never believe you and they will leave you alone. To a company, no consumer will buy your product again.
Nowadays, there are many dishonest performance in our society. ...... Another case in the point, a pair of shoes was made from goat. However, in order to sale at a high price, the salers would say they were made from cow which has good quality.
?、贏lthough honesty is believed to be a virtue, there are still dishonest people in our society. For example, some businessmen sell fake product to their consumers; some students cheat in the exams.
Dishonest people are short-sighted.
注：virtue 美德;customer 顧客
①In our modern social life, there are many examples around us show many people are cheated. Advertisements cheat people, salesmen cheat people, even one's closest friends cheat him or her. So many heartbreaks are heard everyday that we cannot help asking: where is our honest exist?
高分作文：
用詞準(zhǔn)確、句式多樣，
推薦句式有，被動(dòng)句 ： It is widely believed that...
呻吟句：I you we;compare come to the conclusion
A comparison of the two graphs leads us to the conclusion that
