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The Career I Pursue的主體段：
A variety of reasons have led me to choose this occupation over other more lucrative ones. First, teaching is learning. To make my lectures more interesting, I have to read more books, explore new knowledge and gain a better understanding of the world—the very thing I like to do in my life. Second, teaching means freedom. As a teacher, I can freely express my opinions and explain them in my own way since nobody will interfere with me. Finally, I like teaching because it offers a certain peace of mind. No more rushing to catching a morning bus, no more anxiety to please a boss, and no more worries about being laid off because you are getting old. 文中有4個詞的短句First, teaching is learning.也有27個詞的長句To make my lectures more interesting, I have to read more books, explore new knowledge and gain a better understanding of the world—the very thing I like to do in my life.有簡單句,也有復雜句As a teacher, I can freely express my opinions and explain them in my own way since nobody will interfere with me;還有同位語句，斷裂句，排比句，比較句等,因而文章讀起來節奏感強。所謂句子變化，主要是指句子的開頭要有變化，句子的結構要有變化，句子的長度要有變化。不要連續使用幾個簡單句（如例9中的a）），要學會使用復雜句（如例9中的b））。
