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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of
Income Gap. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:
1. 有些人認為收入差距的存在是合理的;
2. 有些人認為收入差距的存在是不合理的
3. 收入差距對社會的影響
●審題概述●
議論文,根據題目要求文章可分為三點:收入差距的合理性;收入差距的不合理性;對社會的影響。在敘述第一、二點時,可適當地的展開一兩個小點。注意各點之間的銜接,以及論證的邏輯。
● 范文●
Income Gap
○1There has been a heated discussion over the growing income gap now. Some people hold that the gap is natural because it ○2reflects different contributions that different people make in their work. ○3In their view, those people with high income work hard and long. Besides, these people bring high ○4efficiency, and create more wealth. Accordingly, they deserve high pay.
○1On the other hand, there are always some people who view this gap negatively. They believe that a lot of crimes happen as a result of this income gap. Some people make so little from their work that they ○2risk taking criminal acts to get rich. In fact, experts have long found out that most cases of crime are directly related to low income. There is ○3another point to ○4back up a negative view against income gap. For most people, income gap may destroy the satisfaction
that they obtain from work.
○1As anything has two sides, so has the problem of income gap. Personally, I believe that this gap may ○2motivate people to compete better in job market. When this gap is growing too
wide, however, our government should make some policies to ○3get rid of its negative consequences.
◇第一段思路點評:
收入差距的合理性
◇語言點提示:
○1 There has been a heated discussion over the growing income gap: 直接點題
○2 reflect 意為“反映”
○3 in one’s view 意為“在某人看來”(分析觀點時常用詞組)
○4 efficiency 意為“效率”
◇第二段思路點評:
收入差距的不合理性
◇語言點提示
○1On the other hand:意為“另一點、另一方面”(提出相反觀點,與上文銜接)
○2risk doing something 意為“冒險做某事”
○3another point: 提出另一小點
○4back up 意為“支持”
◇第三段思路點評:
收入差距的影響
◇語言點提示
○1As anything has two sides, so…... 議論文常用句式
○2motivate:意為“激勵,刺激”
○3get rid of:意為“擺脫,除去”