學生托福口語錄音:如上音頻。
口語題目:
Describe a person that you look up to as a role model. Explain how this person has influenced your life. Include details and examples to support your response.
名師點評:
Comment for Independent Task 1 or 2
Overall Score:17
評分標準:
1、Generalization:論述You kook up your best friend as a role model 的理由充分,但是沒有層次感。
建議:分2-3個點來表述自己的理由。例如:Firstly,... Secondly,...籠統的說一堆,給人條理不清晰的感覺~
2、Delivery:語速有些斷斷續續,整體語音語調的表述較為生硬,需要整體糾正發音哦~。
例如:just,that,study 發音需要糾正。
3、Language Use:語言句型和詞匯運用有所欠缺,表達方式不夠流暢,但有一定的句法錯誤。
例如:he tell me that ...不符合語法,改為:he told me that...
4、Topic Development:信息觀點表述不流暢。