為了更形象化的幫助大家了解優(yōu)秀的托福口語句子，小編和大家分享一篇通過例題講解托福口語資料的優(yōu)缺點，通過對不足之處以及怎樣提高進行分析，將托福口語優(yōu)秀的句子形象化、可視化。
　　例題：
　　Choose a place you go to often that is important to you and explain why it is important. Please include specific details in your explanation.
　　Answer：
　　The most important place to me is library. I like reading very much. In library I can read books I want, novels, science books, even history books. The knowledge I want is prepared to me.
　　解析
　　(1) Original: In library I can read books I want, novels, science books, even history books.
　　Revised: In library I can read books I want, such as, novels, science books, even history books.
　　這樣會使句子過渡銜接地更加自然，此外，such as它非常口語化，在口語中使用正合適，但是在寫作中則不要使用為妙。
　　(2)深層次陳述問題方面的欠缺。
　　從上面的scripts中可以看得出他在全方位地支撐論點方面還有提升的空間。
　　其實他還可以從study, rest, date這幾個分支來闡述。具體可以這樣表述：Sometimes I can study there. Because it is a very quiet place; it is also a good place for me to take a rest. I can relax in the library. As nobody bothers me there; moreover, the library provides a wonderful environment for lovers to have a date.很明顯添加這些內(nèi)容之后，整個陳述就顯得很完整了!