很多考生對自己托福寫作低分的原因不太清楚，也就沒有辦法找到改進的地方。其實考生們在托福寫作上經常會用一些差勁的句子，正是這些句子導致了大家的托福寫作的低分。下面為大家整理了25個托福寫作的差勁句與改進后的，供大家借鑒。
　　1. I am not good at maths, but English
　　改進: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.
　　2. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children’s leisure time?
　　改進: Who is the proper person to plan children’s leisure time?
　　3.It is children who clear about their interests.
　　改進: It is children who are clear about their own interests.
　　4. I agree the latter idea.(漏掉介詞是大家在托福寫作中低分的常見病句。)
　　改進: I agree with the latter idea.
　　5. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.
　　改進: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.
　　6. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.
　　改進: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.
　　7. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.(語義重復也是大家在托福寫作中導致低分的主要原因)
　　改進：People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.
　　8. No one knows all the things.
　　改進: No one knows everything.
　　9. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.
　　改進: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.
　　10. Each form of shavings friends has its advantages.
　　改進: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.
　　11. I was admitted to a Key University for which few dared to sign up.
　　改進: I was admitted to a Key University to which few dared to apply.
　　12. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.
　　改進: Luckily, he knew an American professor.
　　13. They will learn the bad habits.
　　改進: They will develop bad habits.
　　14. In this continued process, people make progress.
　　改進: In this cycle, people make progress.
　　15. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.
　　改進: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.
　　16. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.
　　改進: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.
　　17. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.
　　改進: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.
　　18. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.
　　改進: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.
　　19. Children should be taught disciplines in groups to avoid unnecessary lost.
　　改進: Children should be taught discipline in groups to avoid unnecessary loss.
　　20. I felt alone.
　　21. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.
　　改進: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.
　　22. Smoking can help you relax your mind.
　　改進: Cigarettes can help you relax.
　　23. What’s about nonsmokers?
　　改進: What about nonsmokers?
　　24. Why not to be a non-smoker?
　　改進: Why not be a non-smoker?
　　25. Everyone will have many friends in his life.
　　改進: Everyone has friends in his life.
　　以上這25個問題句子是導致大家在托福寫作中低分的主要原因，而且是大家在托福寫作中最容易犯的錯誤，所以大家一定要引以為戒。祝大家考試順利!