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Apple 蘋果公司

Krissy L. Another compelling illustration of the importance of creativity in our world today is the success of the technological company Apple, Inc. and its founder, Steve Jobs. Jobs founded the company in the late 1970s, and it has transformed over the last forty years into one of the largest and most successful electronics and technology production companies in the world. Apple, Inc. has created products such as the iPhone, iPod, and Macbook which serve a purpose in education, entertainment, and business. These products are unlike any other in the world of modem technology because they have features beyond that of past computers. Apple's products are so advanced that other brands can barely compete with their exceptional ideas. Without the creative minds fueling Apple's production, the company might have failed decades ago and the technology of the present world would be drastically different.
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以喬布斯為支柱的關(guān)于蘋果電腦的歷史及其發(fā)展歷程的這段內(nèi)容寫得相當(dāng)不錯， 史蒂夫·喬布斯比起比爾·蓋茨來說，是一個更加具有遠(yuǎn)見卓識的人。Krissy在寫這個段落時，用了很多細(xì)節(jié)，包括產(chǎn)品線的名稱。能寫出實(shí)實(shí)在在的細(xì)節(jié)，這才是一個好作者。