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一、 結構篇

1、開頭

Sample one(適用于有一些背景or有一個中心詞而且編得出來那個quotation的所有情況(二選一，agree or disagree,除了個別);

On contemporary society(一般的背景)/ With the advent of the technologically advanced society (the information explosive era(與科技有關的背景)，XX(中心詞) serves as a catalyst for our future success/ XX is synonymous with knowledge and the road to success/XX plays an essential/increasingly important role in…/XX is enjoying an increasingly high popularity among people./很簡單的一句背景 , However, people (universities, government, citizen, society, government,) are/is invariably faced with such a question/ can’t help wondering:改寫題目1.Confucian (Yu Qiuyu, Mark Twain, William Shakespeare), (one of) the greatest and most influential Chinese philosophers (scholars, educators, writers, thinkers, statesmen), has insightfully commented, “___編____”I cling to an unshakeable belief that his comment gives the answer to this question:改寫題目2.

Among countless factors which contribute to my position are following conspicuous ones(最后一定排比結尾,且如果字數夠了這一句就不要).

要做的：想一句簡單的背景+編一句名言+改寫兩次題目

Sample two：(如果sample one的名言編不出來或者不適合編如leisure time，就用下面的)

On contemporary society(一般的背景)/ With the advent of the technologically advanced society (the information explosive era(與科技有關的背景))/ On account of …，XX(中心詞) serves as a catalyst for our future success/ XX is synonymous with knowledge and the road to success/XX plays an essential/increasingly important role in… /XX is enjoying an increasingly high popularity among people./ 很簡單的一句背景( 如so…that…/not only…but also). However，when it comes to the choice between AA and BB/When asked about whether改寫題目1, people get into a dilemma. According to my personality and experiences/As far as I am concerned/From my perspective, I cling to an unshakeable belief that改寫題目2.以下最后決定怎樣寫：Among countless factors which contribute to my position are following conspicuous ones(最后一定排比結尾)/AA not only…but also(2)/There are various merits AA brings about, first of all, to…; secondly, to…;and lastly…(3).

要做的：想一句簡單的背景+改寫兩次題目+總起(最后寫)

2、分點一：分層論證

Basic to any understanding of the benefits we can get from

_______ is that__________/ First and foremost,

On one hand_________, On the other hand_________

Besides/ What’s more/ In addition.

這一段主要說理，在分論點里可以加一些小的例子細節，重點是要用一些精華句子!

3、分點二：舉例論證

Further lending credence to my position is that____________

(簡單闡述/例子字不夠就多講點廢話)I can think of no better illustration than the example of(典型例子)/ A case in point is that(不是很典型)________,…..(例子見后面)

一句話總結例子：As a result,強調句/倒裝句/表利弊的句型/反面論證如果沒有會怎樣

4、讓步段：

Agree or disagree: Admittedly,_____,to some extent, may directly or indirectly ____ /has its undeniable detriments. For instance, _______

However, the valuable merits of_______ considerably overshadow the drawbacks/ on no account________./

二選一：Admittedly, BB also has certain merits which deserve some words here. For example, ____(字數不夠就多講點) However，BB 的缺點或AA也可以做到. Compared with AA, (which 可以總結所有優點或針對BB的一方面, )it pales.

5、結尾段：

Therefore, due to the above mentioned reasons, which sometimes correlate with each other to form an organic whole and thus become more persuasive than any single one of them(字不夠了用), I reinforce my stand point that 改寫題目3

Only via(by/through /with/when/after) ___can we__________;

only via(by/through /with/when/after) ___can we________;

and only via(by/through /with/when/after)___can we_______

Or It is A that...;it is A that...;and it is A that...(不好寫或顯得累贅就不要了)