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115. Some people prefer to plan activities for their free time very carefully. Others choose not to make any plans at all for their free time. Compare the benefits of planning free-time activities with the benefits of not making plans. Which do you prefer — planning or not planning for your leisure time? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your choice.
參考分析： 傾向于選擇“有計(jì)劃”。因?yàn)椴还茏鍪裁词虑椋嗌俣紩?huì)有一些計(jì)劃。至少知道從什么時(shí)候開始，到什么時(shí)候結(jié)束。羅列幾個(gè)實(shí)現(xiàn)計(jì)劃的好處。據(jù)幾個(gè)實(shí)例。 使用讓步結(jié)構(gòu)結(jié)尾：盡管確實(shí)有一些過程完全不需要計(jì)劃，而計(jì)劃也做不到面面俱到(cover all aspects; have every detail thought of -- think of every detail)，但是適當(dāng)?shù)挠?jì)劃仍然是必要的。 |
115、為自己的空閑時(shí)間進(jìn)行計(jì)劃 |
Topic 115 Plan for free time
In my opinion it is always better to plan our free time because although it is considered leisure time but some people might need it to get certain things done that could not have been finished if they were left to be done another time.
Probably for most grown-ups free time is only during their weekends which is usually for one or two days only. It is actually a very short period of time if you have lots of things to be done. For this reason planning for leisure time is very important because there are lots of things that needs to be done and not all of theses things are for fun.
For adults, leisure time is not only about waking up late, spending the whole day in bed or in front of the television and reading some magazines. In fact if it is well planned, free time can be used to meet our friends, go to a restaurant, go to the cinema, go shopping or even read a nice book. Others may use it to do more important things such as taking up a new hobby or studying if they are students. Consequently their time needs to be organized very well in order to accomplish all the things they need to do compared to the short time they have.
On the other hand, if we do not keep a list or a schedule of the things that we should do, we may only finish a thing or two but time will never be enough for us to accomplish all the tasks we have. It seems to me that leisure time should not be left without planning because it is really important to many people.
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