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我已經(jīng)托福三戰(zhàn)過了，對考試各方面都很熟悉，所以大家到考前了有什么疑惑也可以發(fā)郵件給我，我會盡力為大家解答。

每天的寫作任務(wù)是這樣的，寫好每天的作文發(fā)至我的郵箱（如果你想加入作文批改小組請注明），我們將進(jìn)入互批作文模式。在此我對每天的topic進(jìn)行解析和范文精講，請大家寫完作文之后不忘進(jìn)行比較，找出自己的不足之處。開始吧！

57. Some movies are serious, designed to make theaudience think. Other movies are designed primarily to amuse and entertain.Which type of movie do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to supportyour answer.

Topic 57 Serious movies vs. entertaining movies

It makes me sensitively to think of Hollywood place where movies were first made before World War I. In those days, Hollywood movie was like a magnet, drawing ambitious young men and women form all over the world.

Up till now, there is nothing that can substitute the position of movies that is the most efficient way to relax us. I prefer movies designed to make the audience think. As far as I know, most movies are supposed to be made from the source material that mirrors a part of the social events. That means there is another methods to force us to think about what we have done for our country, what is our responsibility in the society and so on. In fact what kind of information we need can be gain from different medias including television, the Internet, radio, newspapers, especially from some movies.

Tracing back to my childhood, I like watching the first work directed by Alfred Hitchcock, Rebecca. So young though I was, it did make me sunk into contemplation. Not only did the plot make me a little confused, but also it really told me the truth that whoever is right or wrong, no one can live in the shadowy place and everyone must live his or her own live, enjoy the sunshine belonging to their own.

A movie worthy thinking about should conquer everything, including one's heart, which never fade with time going by, even be possible to change our lives. Here I can not help siding with the other view, however it does not mean that we should totally ignore it, this is not a matter of making an "either-or" judgment. What we want to clarify here is what is primary and what is secondary.

If permits, a movie primarily designed to make audience think add some amusement and entertainment, just like tasting a cup of cappuccino.

好了，今天就說這么多，大家一定要堅持練習(xí)作文，每天進(jìn)步一小點，一個月下來托福寫作絕對是質(zhì)的提升！希望大家跟著我每天一篇練下去，寫作都是硬功夫，跟小時候每周都要寫語文作文是一樣的，功夫到家自然成，加油！

最后再mention一下互評作文的事情，這個作文互評目前只有我在做，我希望盡可能給有需要的可可粉們提供幫助，如果你們中有愿意跟我一起批改大家作文的，一定要mail我加入哦！（互批可以進(jìn)步非常快，做過才知道！）

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